Hi Kyle!
I really do like the gradient you introduced in the next email, it give
more depth in my opinion.
I don't mind the wave so much, my other comment still stands - we need
to add more trees or to make them more united to give it more visual
uniformity. Right now they look a bit random, especially the round tree
might seem out of place. Maybe try making them more uniform? For
reference, check out these photos:
https://mir-s3-cdn-cf.behance.net/project_modules/max_1200/d334d348282455...,
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/17/24/ce/1724ce569c0135da842c49...,
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/6e/9c/0f/6e9c0f47fe285436886ca6...
I'm not sure how literal we want to be with the forest, but I'd try
start with smaller trees right on the 'shore' and put bigger ones
behind. See here:
http://imgur.com/a/k6cxF
There are a bunch of nice tree silhouettes that we could add here:
https://openclipart.org/search/?query=tree
Also maybe make them less black?
What do you think?
On 03/04/2017 04:08 PM, Kyle Reynolds Conway wrote:
Mo & Maria: Here's a de-waveformed version:
http://little.kylerconway.com/uptime/fedora26-no-wave.png
S.Kemter: The smoke effect turned out to be so washed out it was basically invisible with
the other gradients. I see below you suggest pulling in another waveform as a pattern
background. I'll give that a try.
General note: lot's of wonderful work floating around, everyone!
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