On 04/20/2010 07:33 PM, Alan Bruce wrote:
Hi,
Hi Alan
I'm not a member of your team, but I have put together some
labels for
Live and install media.
We are glad to see new people contributing.
They are principally designed so that they use minimal ink, which
makes
them more suitable for Freemedia purposes. They also work for full face
or partial face style printable discs.
I have linked them from my user page at
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Muckypups
There:
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Disc_label_images
You could have used as a base something from
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/MediaArt/F12
I have tried to follow the guidelines, and I think they're ok in
that
regard.
Just wanted to make sure you have no objections.
The logo usage guidelines seems OK, the copyright disclaimer seems OK,
still:
- the wordmark is blurry, have you used a resized bitmap instead of a
vector source? if so, go to
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Logo and ask
for an SVG;
- I feel the "12" is too tick, use a normal font, not bold, and add a
blue stroke;
- the "installation DVD" text is too close to the right edge, giving an
unbalanced look to the composition.
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