On Wed, 2008-05-21 at 22:40 +0200, Robert M. Albrecht wrote:
Hi,
thanks for the feedback.
Version 2 is online, including the english translation.
www.romal.de/files/FedoraHowToParticipateEnglish.pdf www.romal.de/files/FedoraHowToParticipateEnglish.odp www.romal.de/files/FedoraHowToParticipate.pdf www.romal.de/files/FedoraHowToParticipate.odp
More suggestions ?
Just a few short things on translation: * slide 7 "Don 't build packets als Root !" -> "Don't build packets as root!" * slide 13 "Hot to install ?" -> "How to install ?" * slide 18 "If rpmlint finds any problems, they must be repaired." -> "If rpmlint finds any problems, you should fix it."
Your presentation is IMHO really good... I love your template ;-)
Luca