On Thu, 2010-12-09 at 14:53 -0800, Larry Cafiero wrote:
What we might consider changing is the first line of the
introduction,
which now says:
"Let´s welcome our new sponsored Ambassador Group Member:"
Maybe it should say something like:
"The Fedora Project welcomes our new sponsored Ambassador Group
Member:" (or "Members" if there is more than one)
The reason to consider a change is that starting the e-mail with
"Let's welcome . . ." can be (mis)understood to be an invitation to
take action, like to "welcome our new sponsored Ambassador Group
Member" by . . . oh, I don't know . . . maybe responding on list?
+1. That makes sense
Oku Onyeibo
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/user:twohot