On 05/20/2010 08:00 AM, David O'Brien wrote:
Stephen Gallagher wrote:
> On 05/19/2010 10:29 PM, David O'Brien wrote:
>> nack.
>>
>> 1. After a long discussion with other writers a couple of days ago, we
>> came to the conclusion that using an article with "SSSD" was
incorrect,
>> because SSSD is a proper noun and a name. Hence, "performance impact on
>> the SSSD" should read "performance impact on SSSD". I know this
gets
>> cloudy if you expand "sssd" in your head, and that's why the
discussion
>> was as long as it was.
>>
>> 2. I'd recommend s/Also/Further at the beginning of a sentence like this.
>>
>> 3. s/assure/ensure
>>
>> 4. s/see the manpages/refer to the man pages
>>
>>
>
> Thanks for the review! Updated patch attached.
>
>
I realise I'm nit-picking now, but our Word Usage guide lists "man page"
as two words (see point 4, above).
Last version, acked off-list.
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