On 05/20/2010 08:37 AM, Stephen Gallagher wrote:
On 05/20/2010 08:08 AM, Stephen Gallagher wrote:
> On 05/20/2010 08:00 AM, David O'Brien wrote:
>> Stephen Gallagher wrote:
>>> On 05/19/2010 10:29 PM, David O'Brien wrote:
>>>> nack.
>>>>
>>>> 1. After a long discussion with other writers a couple of days ago, we
>>>> came to the conclusion that using an article with "SSSD" was
>>>> incorrect,
>>>> because SSSD is a proper noun and a name. Hence, "performance
>>>> impact on
>>>> the SSSD" should read "performance impact on SSSD". I know
this gets
>>>> cloudy if you expand "sssd" in your head, and that's why
the
>>>> discussion
>>>> was as long as it was.
>>>>
>>>> 2. I'd recommend s/Also/Further at the beginning of a sentence like
>>>> this.
>>>>
>>>> 3. s/assure/ensure
>>>>
>>>> 4. s/see the manpages/refer to the man pages
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>> Thanks for the review! Updated patch attached.
>>>
>>>
>> I realise I'm nit-picking now, but our Word Usage guide lists "man
page"
>> as two words (see point 4, above).
>>
>
> Last version, acked off-list.
>
Accidentally resent the previous patch. Correct one attached.
*sigh* Still the wrong patch. One more try?
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