commit 81f993b6e23782bcda1f71789767376825c88e9b
Author: Jared K. Smith <jaredsmith(a)jaredsmith.net>
Date: Wed Mar 26 14:57:40 2014 -0400
Fix passive voice and explain L10N acronym
en-US/community.xml | 4 ++--
1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/community.xml b/en-US/community.xml
index 86f7903..0931a03 100644
--- a/en-US/community.xml
+++ b/en-US/community.xml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
<listitem>
<formalpara><title>Proofreading</title>
<para>
- Tasks like proofreading documentation can be done by anyone. Feedback from
readers is encouraged, and helps the writers identify confusing or inaccurate content.
Reporting content that you have trouble understanding or instructions that don't work
as expected helps writers improve their work.
+ Proofreading is a task that can be be done by almost anyone. We strong
encourage feedback from readers, as this helps the authors identify confusing or
inaccurate content. Reporting content that you have trouble understanding or instructions
that don't work as expected helps writers improve their work.
</para>
</formalpara>
</listitem>
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
<listitem>
<formalpara><title>Translating</title>
<para>
- The <ulink
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/L10N">Fedora
Localization Project</ulink> translates Fedora's documentation and some
software. <acronym>L10n</acronym> is a separate group within Fedora that often
works closely with the Docs Project.
+ The <ulink
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/L10N">Fedora
Localization Project</ulink> translates Fedora's documentation and some
software. Localization (often abbreviated as <acronym>L10N</acronym>, where
the <literal>10</literal> represents the number of letters between
<literal>L</literal> and <literal>N</literal> in the word in
English) is a separate group within Fedora that often works closely with the Docs
Project.
</para>
</formalpara>
</listitem>