commit 2a16c7ba45fae84c3ac3faabe20b68b7360b451d
Author: Jack Reed <jreed(a)redhat.com>
Date: Thu Dec 6 16:05:13 2012 +1000
Manual partitioning wording edits
en-US/Disk_Partitioning-x86.xml | 6 +++---
.../Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml | 2 +-
.../Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml | 2 +-
3 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning-x86.xml b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning-x86.xml
index 6e3fa54..6df120c 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning-x86.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning-x86.xml
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@
If you have not yet planned how to set up your partitions, refer to <xref
linkend="ch-partitions-x86" /> and <xref
linkend="s2-diskpartrecommend-x86" />. At a bare minimum, you need an
appropriately-sized root partition, and usually a swap partition appropriate to the amount
of RAM you have on the system.
</para>
<xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_common-para-1.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- The partitioning tool used by the installation program --> <xi:include
href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-10.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- Adding a partition is a two-step process. --> <xi:include
href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_x86_ppc-para-1.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
- <!-- The partitioning screen offers a graphical representation... -->
<xi:include href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- The partitioning tool used by the installation program --> <xi:include
href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_x86_ppc-para-1.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- The Manual Partitioning screen initially features... --> <xi:include
href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-10.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
+ <!-- Adding a partition is a two-step process. --> <xi:include
href="Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml"
xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
<!-- Above the graphical representation of the device... --> <figure
float="0" id="fig-diskpart-ddmain-x86">
<title>Partitioning on x86, AMD64, and Intel 64 Systems</title>
<mediaobject>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml
b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml
index a4696d4..b193c47 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-2.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- To create the mount points automatically, use your mouse to click the link within the
pane that directs you to do so. This will generate a
<filename>/boot</filename> partition, a <filename>/</filename>
(root) partition, and a swap partition proportionate to the size of the device. These are
the recommended partitions for a typical installation (refer to <xref
linkend="s2-diskpartrecommend-x86" />, but you can add additional partitions
if you need to.
+ To create the mount points automatically, use your mouse to click the link within the
pane that directs you to do so. This will generate a
<filename>/boot</filename> partition, a <filename>/</filename>
(root) partition, and a swap partition proportionate to the size of the device. These are
the recommended partitions for a typical installation (refer to <xref
linkend="s2-diskpartrecommend-x86" />), but you can add additional partitions
if you need to.
</para>
diff --git a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml
b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml
index 694aa52..f7ec8ca 100644
--- a/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml
+++ b/en-US/Disk_Partitioning_Graphical_common-para-3.xml
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@
%BOOK_ENTITIES;
]>
<para>
- To change which drive/s a mount point should be located on, click the configuration
button at the bottom of the pane and select one or more devices.
+ To change which drive/s a mount point should be located on, click the configuration
button at the bottom of the pane to open the <guilabel>Configure Mount
Point</guilabel> dialog and select one or more devices.
</para>