Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13226
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken
into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML
review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the
XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little
colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to
'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us
author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000 1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:29 -0000 1.9
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
<title>Installing Packages</title>
<para>
- &FED; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes
+ &FC; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes
the selected packages to your system. Network and DVD installations
- require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FED;
+ require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FC;
prompts you to change discs periodically. After you insert a disc,
select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to resume the installation.
</para>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<para>
After installation completes, select <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton>
- to restart your computer. &FED; ejects any loaded discs before the
+ to restart your computer. &FC; ejects any loaded discs before the
computer reboots.
</para>
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