From fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com Wed Jun 10 15:28:19 2015 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="===============7610163963487432018==" MIME-Version: 1.0 From: fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com To: docs-commits at lists.fedoraproject.org Subject: install-guide fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml, 1.8, 1.9 Date: Wed, 08 Jun 2005 20:18:31 -0400 Message-ID: <200506090018.j590IV9u013243@cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com> --===============7610163963487432018== Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Author: kwade Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13226 Modified Files: fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml = Log Message: Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling par= agraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: t= his is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near pe= rfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to= discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch i= t where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentati= on'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the ma= iling list. Index: fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-e= n.xml,v retrieving revision 1.8 retrieving revision 1.9 diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9 --- fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 27 May 2005 22:15:15 -00= 00 1.8 +++ fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:29 -000= 0 1.9 @@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ Installing Packages = - &FED; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes + &FC; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes the selected packages to your system. Network and DVD installations - require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FED; + require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FC; prompts you to change discs periodically. After you insert a disc, select OK to resume the installation. @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ = After installation completes, select Reboot - to restart your computer. &FED; ejects any loaded discs before the + to restart your computer. &FC; ejects any loaded discs before the computer reboots. = --===============7610163963487432018==--