install-guide/devel/en_US installingpackages.xml,1.2,1.3
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Author: pfrields
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Modified Files:
installingpackages.xml
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Index: installingpackages.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/installingpackages.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- installingpackages.xml 29 Sep 2006 23:35:07 -0000 1.2
+++ installingpackages.xml 23 May 2007 02:12:55 -0000 1.3
@@ -23,23 +23,6 @@
select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to resume the installation.
</para>
- <figure id="fig-installing-inprogress">
- <title>Installing Packages Screen</title>
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/installingpackages.eps" format="EPS"/>
- </imageobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/installingpackages.png" format="PNG"/>
- </imageobject>
- <textobject>
- <phrase>
- Installing packages screen.
- </phrase>
- </textobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </figure>
-
<para>
After installation completes, select <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton>
to restart your computer. &FC; ejects any loaded discs before the
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install-guide/devel/en_US abouttoinstall.xml,1.2,1.3
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv23039
Modified Files:
abouttoinstall.xml
Log Message:
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Index: abouttoinstall.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/abouttoinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
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diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- abouttoinstall.xml 29 Sep 2006 23:35:07 -0000 1.2
+++ abouttoinstall.xml 23 May 2007 02:11:13 -0000 1.3
@@ -33,24 +33,6 @@
installation media to start over.
</para>
</important>
-
- <figure id="fig-about-to-install">
- <title>About to Install Screen</title>
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/abouttoinstall.eps" format="EPS"/>
- </imageobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/abouttoinstall.png" format="PNG"/>
- </imageobject>
- <textobject>
- <phrase>
- About to install screen.
- </phrase>
- </textobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </figure>
-
<para>
Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to begin the installation.
</para>
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install-guide/devel/en_US packageselection.xml,1.8,1.9
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv23013
Modified Files:
packageselection.xml
Log Message:
- Remove old Extras information.
- Keeping screenshots for this slightly confusing interface, for now.
Index: packageselection.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
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diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- packageselection.xml 23 May 2007 01:22:31 -0000 1.8
+++ packageselection.xml 23 May 2007 02:10:37 -0000 1.9
@@ -64,25 +64,10 @@
of software you select for installation.
</para>
<para>
- The &FEX; software repository contains thousands of additional
- packages you can add at installation time if desired. To add the
- &FEX; software repository to the installation program, select
- <guilabel>&FEX;</guilabel> from the repository listing. &FEX; is
- already defined in the installation program and requires no
- further input. For more information about Fedora Extras, refer to
- the <guilabel>Release Notes</guilabel> or <ulink
- url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Extras"/>.
- </para>
- <note>
- <title>&FEX; and Network Connectivity</title>
- <para>The &FEX; repository selection is available if your computer
- has a connection to the internet.</para>
- </note>
- <para>
To include software from <firstterm>repositories</firstterm> other
- than &FC; and &FEX;, select <guilabel>Add additional software
- repositories</guilabel>. The following list includes examples
- of ways you can use this option.
+ than the &FED; package collection, select <guilabel>Add additional
+ software repositories</guilabel>. The following list includes
+ examples of ways you can use this option.
</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -90,20 +75,21 @@
<title>Get the Latest Fedora Software</title>
<para>
If you provide the location of a repository of updates for
- Fedora Core, your system will have the most recent versions
- of Core software. You will not need to peform a system
+ &DISTRO;, your system will have the most recent versions of
+ &DISTRO; software. You will not need to peform a system
update immediately after installation to get these updates.
This usage is ideal if you are installing over the Internet
or any network where bandwidth is a concern.
</para>
</formalpara>
<caution>
- <title>Upgrading and Updates</title> <para>Package updates
- during the release cycle of a single verison of &FC; are
- intended to upgrade only that version. If you are upgrading
- a previous version of &FC;, you may encounter problems if
- you include an update repository during this step. Problems
- are less likely when performing a fresh installation.</para>
+ <title>Upgrading and Updates</title>
+ <para>Package updates during the release cycle of a single
+ verison of &FC; are intended to upgrade only that version.
+ If you are upgrading a previous version of &FC;, you may
+ encounter problems if you include an update repository
+ during this step. Problems are less likely when performing
+ a fresh installation.</para>
</caution>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -118,48 +104,15 @@
</itemizedlist>
<para>
If you select <guilabel>Add additional software
- repositories</guilabel>, the following dialog appears:
- </para>
- <figure id="fig-additional-repos">
- <title>Add Repository Screen</title>
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/additionalrepo.eps" format="EPS"/>
- </imageobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/additionalrepo.png" format="PNG"/>
- </imageobject>
- <textobject>
- <phrase>
- Add repository screen.
- </phrase>
- </textobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </figure>
- <para>
- Provide a name for the repository and the URL for its location.
- Here are some URLs for listings of specific Fedora software
- repository mirrors.
- </para>
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>Fedora Core Updates -
- http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors/updates-released-fc&FCLOCALVER;</para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
- <para>Fedora Extras -
- http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors/fedora-extras-&FCLOCALVER;</para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist>
- <para>
- The URLs above provide a list of actual mirrors. You cannot use
- them verbatim in the <guilabel>Add repository</guilabel> dialog.
- Visit the URL for a list of actual repository locations. If you
- see the text <literal>$ARCH</literal> in the URL, substitute your
- system's architecture. See <xref
- linkend="sn-which-arch"/> for more information on
- architectures.
- </para>
+ repositories</guilabel>, the <guilabel>Add repository</guilabel>
+ dialog appears. Provide a <guilabel>Repository name</guilabel> and
+ the <guilabel>Repository URL</guilabel> for its location.
+ </para>
+ <tip>
+ <title>&DISTRO; Software Mirrors</title>
+ <para>To find a &DISTRO; software mirror near you, refer to <ulink
+ url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mirrors"/>.</para>
+ </tip>
<para>
Once you provide information for an additional repository, the
installer reads the package metadata over the network. Software
@@ -168,7 +121,7 @@
more information on selecting packages.
</para>
<note>
- <title>Backtracking Erases Added Repository Data</title>
+ <title>Backtracking Removes Repository Metadata</title>
<para>
If you choose <guilabel>Back</guilabel> from the package
selection screen, any extra repository data you may have entered
@@ -177,7 +130,7 @@
repository once entered.
</para>
</note>
- </section>
+ </section>
<section id="sn-package-selection">
<title>Customizing the Software Selection</title>
<para>
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install-guide/devel/en_US packageselection.xml,1.7,1.8
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv12491
Modified Files:
packageselection.xml
Log Message:
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Index: packageselection.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
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diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- packageselection.xml 23 May 2007 01:22:11 -0000 1.7
+++ packageselection.xml 23 May 2007 01:22:31 -0000 1.8
@@ -17,11 +17,8 @@
<title>Software Selection</title>
<para>
By default, the &FED; installation process loads a selection of
- software that is suitable for a desktop system.
- </para>
- <para>
- To include or remove software for common tasks, select the relevant
- items from the list:
+ software that is suitable for a desktop system. To include or remove
+ software for common tasks, select the relevant items from the list:
</para>
<variablelist>
<varlistentry>
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install-guide/devel/en_US packageselection.xml,1.6,1.7
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: pfrields
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Modified Files:
packageselection.xml
Log Message:
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Index: packageselection.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
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diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- packageselection.xml 29 Apr 2007 14:05:11 -0000 1.6
+++ packageselection.xml 23 May 2007 01:22:11 -0000 1.7
@@ -19,22 +19,6 @@
By default, the &FED; installation process loads a selection of
software that is suitable for a desktop system.
</para>
- <figure id="fig-task-selection">
- <title>Task Selection Screen</title>
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/taskselection.eps" format="EPS"/>
- </imageobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/taskselection.png" format="PNG"/>
- </imageobject>
- <textobject>
- <phrase>
- Task selection screen.
- </phrase>
- </textobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </figure>
<para>
To include or remove software for common tasks, select the relevant
items from the list:
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install-guide/devel/en_US rootpassword.xml,1.3,1.4
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv12205
Modified Files:
rootpassword.xml
Log Message:
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Index: rootpassword.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/rootpassword.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- rootpassword.xml 23 May 2007 01:09:07 -0000 1.3
+++ rootpassword.xml 23 May 2007 01:16:38 -0000 1.4
@@ -95,11 +95,8 @@
into the <guilabel>Root Password</guilabel> field. &FED; displays
the characters as asterisks for security. Type the same password
into the <guilabel>Confirm</guilabel> field to ensure it is set
- correctly.
- </para>
- <para>
- After you set the root password, select <guibutton>Next</guibutton>
- to proceed.
+ correctly. After you set the root password, select
+ <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to proceed.
</para>
</chapter>
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install-guide/devel/en_US rootpassword.xml,1.2,1.3
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: pfrields
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Modified Files:
rootpassword.xml
Log Message:
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Index: rootpassword.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/rootpassword.xml,v
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--- rootpassword.xml 29 Sep 2006 23:35:07 -0000 1.2
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@@ -97,24 +97,6 @@
into the <guilabel>Confirm</guilabel> field to ensure it is set
correctly.
</para>
-
- <figure id="fig-set-rootpw">
- <title>Set Root Password Screen</title>
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/rootpassword.eps" format="EPS"/>
- </imageobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/rootpassword.png" format="PNG"/>
- </imageobject>
- <textobject>
- <phrase>
- Set root password screen.
- </phrase>
- </textobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </figure>
-
<para>
After you set the root password, select <guibutton>Next</guibutton>
to proceed.
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install-guide/devel/en_US timezone.xml,1.4,1.5
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4579
Modified Files:
timezone.xml
Log Message:
Moving indexterms before the affected para, while very slightly less
granular, is far easier to edit, so I recommend it.
Index: timezone.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/timezone.xml,v
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--- timezone.xml 23 May 2007 00:50:43 -0000 1.4
+++ timezone.xml 23 May 2007 00:55:16 -0000 1.5
@@ -42,16 +42,15 @@
</section>
<section id="sn-utc">
<title>Universal Co-ordinated Time (UTC)</title>
-
- <para>
- <indexterm>
+ <indexterm>
<primary>UTC (Universal Co-ordinated time)</primary>
- </indexterm> Universal Co-ordinated Time is also known as
- <indexterm>
+ </indexterm>
+ <indexterm>
<primary>GMT (Greenwich Mean Time)</primary>
<see>UTC</see>
- </indexterm> Greenwich Mean Time (GMT).
- </para>
+ </indexterm>
+ <para>For purposes of addressing time zones, Universal Co-ordinated
+ Time is also known as Greenwich Mean Time (GMT).</para>
<para>
If &FC; is the only operating system on your computer, select
@@ -67,9 +66,9 @@
<para>
Do not enable the <guilabel>System clock uses UTC</guilabel>
- option if your machine also runs Microsoft Windows. Microsoft
- operating systems change the BIOS clock to match local time
- rather than UTC. This may cause unexpected behavior under &FC;.
+ option if your machine also runs Microsoft Windows. Microsoft
+ operating systems change the BIOS clock to match local time
+ rather than UTC. This may cause unexpected behavior under &FC;.
</para>
</caution>
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install-guide/devel/en_US timezone.xml,1.3,1.4
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
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Modified Files:
timezone.xml
Log Message:
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/timezone.xml,v
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--- timezone.xml 23 May 2007 00:50:22 -0000 1.3
+++ timezone.xml 23 May 2007 00:50:43 -0000 1.4
@@ -27,10 +27,7 @@
<para>
&FED; displays on the screen two methods for selecting the time
- zone.
- </para>
- <para>
- To select a time zone using the map, first place your mouse
+ zone. To select a time zone using the map, first place your mouse
pointer over your region on the map. Click once to magnify that
region on the map. Next, select the yellow dot that represents the
city nearest to your location. Once you select a dot, it becomes a
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install-guide/devel/en_US timezone.xml,1.2,1.3
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4286
Modified Files:
timezone.xml
Log Message:
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Index: timezone.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/timezone.xml,v
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--- timezone.xml 29 Sep 2006 23:35:07 -0000 1.2
+++ timezone.xml 23 May 2007 00:50:22 -0000 1.3
@@ -29,22 +29,6 @@
&FED; displays on the screen two methods for selecting the time
zone.
</para>
- <figure id="fig-timezone">
- <title>Time Zone Selection Screen</title>
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/timezone.eps" format="EPS"/>
- </imageobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/timezone.png" format="PNG"/>
- </imageobject>
- <textobject>
- <phrase>
- Time zone selection screen.
- </phrase>
- </textobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </figure>
<para>
To select a time zone using the map, first place your mouse
pointer over your region on the map. Click once to magnify that
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