xml-normalize 010-text.xml,1.1,1.2
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: jtr
Update of /cvs/docs/xml-normalize
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1431
Modified Files:
010-text.xml
Log Message:
Again!
18 years, 11 months
xml-normalize 010-text.xml,NONE,1.1
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: jtr
Update of /cvs/docs/xml-normalize
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1341
Added Files:
010-text.xml
Log Message:
This file originally all left-justified.
***** Error reading new file: [Errno 2] No such file or directory: '010-text.xml'
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xml-normalize - Imported sources
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: jtr
Update of /cvs/docs/xml-normalize
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1289
Log Message:
KEEP OUT! THIS MEANS YOU! ABANDON ALL HOPE, YE WHO ENTER HERE!
Playpen for debugging the XML normalization process.
Status:
Vendor Tag: jtr
Release Tags: initial
N xml-normalize/README
No conflicts created by this import
18 years, 11 months
install-guide fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml,1.9,1.10
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13366
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml 27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000 1.9
+++ fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:19:08 -0000 1.10
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<para>
The &FED; installation program requires the <systemitem
- class="username">root</systemitem> to be at least six characters
+ class="username">root</systemitem> password to be at least six characters
long. Because the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>
account may potentially control any part of the system, use the
following guidelines to create a good password:
18 years, 11 months
install-guide fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml, 1.12, 1.13
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13343
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml 29 May 2005 13:38:55 -0000 1.12
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:19:01 -0000 1.13
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
<para>
&FC; divides included software into <indexterm>
<primary>package groups</primary>
- </indexterm> <firstterm>package groups</firstterm> which make
+ </indexterm> <firstterm>package groups</firstterm> that make
software selection easier.
</para>
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
<para>
To change which packages within a selected group will be
installed, select the <guilabel>Details</guilabel> link next to
- the name of the group. &FED; automatically installs
+ the name of the group. &FC; automatically installs
<guilabel>Base Packages</guilabel> of a group if the group is
selected. Change the selection of <guilabel>Optional
Packages</guilabel> by using the checkbox next to the name of
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- &FED; lists with each group the number of packages currently
+ &FC; lists with each group the number of packages currently
selected for installation, and the total number of packages within
that group.
</para>
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@
<title>Additional Language Support</title>
<para>
- Your &FED; system automatically supports the language that you
+ Your &FC; system automatically supports the language that you
selected at the start of the installation process. To include
support for additional languages, select the packages for those
languages from the <guilabel>Language Support</guilabel> package
@@ -175,8 +175,8 @@
</para>
<para>
- If you select <guilabel>Everything</guilabel>, &FED; installs
- <emphasis>all</emphasis> of the packages provided. Although &FED;
+ If you select <guilabel>Everything</guilabel>, &FC; installs
+ <emphasis>all</emphasis> of the packages provided. Although &FC;
installs many additional network services in this package group,
some are not enabled after installation. This option may be useful
for some testing and development purposes.
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@
<para>
After you choose the desired packages, select
- <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed. &FED; checks your
+ <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed. &FC; checks your
selection, and automatically adds any extra packages required to
use the software you select.
</para>
18 years, 11 months
install-guide fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml, 1.13, 1.14
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13318
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000 1.13
+++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:55 -0000 1.14
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
<title>Installation from a Hard Drive</title>
<para>
- You may install from a hard drive which contains the ISO image
+ You may install from a hard drive that contains the ISO image
files for the &FED; discs. The hard drive may be internal to the
computer or attached by USB. The partition on the hard drive
holding the ISO files must be formatted with the <indexterm>
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@
</para>
<note>
- <title>FAT-16, FAT-32 and <systemitem
+ <title>FAT-16, FAT-32, and <systemitem
class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem></title>
<para>
Before you begin installation from a hard drive, check the
18 years, 11 months
install-guide fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml,1.5,1.6
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13295
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml 22 May 2005 14:17:00 -0000 1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:48 -0000 1.6
@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@
<title>Documentation on the Web</title>
<para>
- The official documentation for &FC; is available from the &FP;
+ Documentation for &FC; is available from the &FP;
Website:
</para>
-
+ <!-- institutional shyness of the word official, odd legal standing -->
<para>
<ulink
url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/">http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/</ulink>
@@ -31,6 +31,16 @@
url="http://www.tldp.org/">http://www.tldp.org/</ulink>
</para>
+ <para>
+ For many parts of &FC;, you may find the &RHEL; documentation
+ useful:
+ </para>
+
+ <para>
+ <ulink
+ url="http://www.redhat.com/docs/manuals/enterprise/">http://www.redhat.com/docs/manuals/enterprise/</ulink>
+ </para>
+
<para>
Many other organizations and individuals also provide tutorials
and HOWTOs for &FED; on their Websites. You can locate
@@ -70,7 +80,7 @@
<para>
The &FP; is driven by the individuals that contribute to it. Community
- members provide support to other users, help to improve the
+ members provide support and documentation to other users, help to improve the
software included in &FC; by testing, and develop new software
alongside the developers employed by &RH;. The results of this
work are available to all.
18 years, 11 months
install-guide fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml,1.9,1.10
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13272
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 20 May 2005 02:16:08 -0000 1.9
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:42 -0000 1.10
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<para>
&FC; is a complete desktop and server operating system created
- entirely with Open Source software.
+ entirely with open source software.
</para>
<caution>
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
<indexterm>
<primary>FOSS (free and open source software)</primary>
</indexterm> <firstterm>free and open source software</firstterm>
- (FOSS) community. The &FP; also provides &FED; Extras, additional
+ (FOSS) community. The &FP; also provides &FEX;, additional
software packaged for installation on a &FC; system.
</para>
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
To install &FC; from discs, you need four installation CDs, or the
installation DVD. There are separate disc sets for each supported
<firstterm>architecture</firstterm>. Currently, &FC; supports the
- <firstterm>i386</firstterm>, <firstterm>ppc</firstterm> and
+ <firstterm>i386</firstterm>, <firstterm>ppc</firstterm>, and
<firstterm>x86_64</firstterm> architectures. These architectures
are described below:
</para>
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
<para>
By default, &FC; systems attempt to discover correct connection
settings for the attached network using <indexterm>
- <primary>DHCP (Dynamic Host Control Protocol)</primary>
+ <primary>DHCP (Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol)</primary>
</indexterm> <firstterm>DHCP</firstterm> (Dynamic Host Control
Protocol). Your network may include a DHCP provider which
delivers settings to other systems on demand. The DHCP provider
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@
the name of the server
</para>
<para>
- the network protocol used for installation (FTP, HTTP or
+ the network protocol used for installation (FTP, HTTP, or
NFS)
</para>
<para>
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
<para>
Some corporate networks include a <firstterm>directory
service</firstterm> that manages user accounts for the
- organization. &FC; systems can join a Kerberos, NIS, Hesiod or
+ organization. &FC; systems can join a Kerberos, NIS, Hesiod, or
<trademark class="registered">Microsoft</trademark> <trademark
class="registered">Windows</trademark> domain as part of the
installation process. &FC; can also use LDAP directories.
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install-guide fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml,1.6,1.7
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13249
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml 27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000 1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:35 -0000 1.7
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@
connections from other systems. Although &FED; connects to NFS
services on other systems, the NFS <emphasis>sharing</emphasis>
component is disabled by default. You may configure your &FED;
- system after installation to offer email, NFS or print services.
+ system after installation to offer email, NFS, or print services.
The SSH service is enabled by default.
</para>
18 years, 11 months
install-guide fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml, 1.8, 1.9
by fedora-docs-commits@redhat.com
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13226
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000 1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:29 -0000 1.9
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
<title>Installing Packages</title>
<para>
- &FED; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes
+ &FC; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes
the selected packages to your system. Network and DVD installations
- require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FED;
+ require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FC;
prompts you to change discs periodically. After you insert a disc,
select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to resume the installation.
</para>
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<para>
After installation completes, select <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton>
- to restart your computer. &FED; ejects any loaded discs before the
+ to restart your computer. &FC; ejects any loaded discs before the
computer reboots.
</para>
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