Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13226
Modified Files: fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml Log Message: Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.8 retrieving revision 1.9 diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9 --- fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000 1.8 +++ fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:29 -0000 1.9 @@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ <title>Installing Packages</title>
<para> - &FED; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes + &FC; reports the installation progress on the screen as it writes the selected packages to your system. Network and DVD installations - require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FED; + require no further action. If you are using CDs to install, &FC; prompts you to change discs periodically. After you insert a disc, select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to resume the installation. </para> @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
<para> After installation completes, select <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> - to restart your computer. &FED; ejects any loaded discs before the + to restart your computer. &FC; ejects any loaded discs before the computer reboots. </para>