Author: jmtaylor
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/F-8/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv32080/en_US
Modified Files:
ArchSpecific.xml
Log Message:
Changed a couple places to active voice.
Index: ArchSpecific.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/F-8/en_US/ArchSpecific.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- ArchSpecific.xml 29 Nov 2007 18:11:27 -0000 1.3
+++ ArchSpecific.xml 29 Nov 2007 19:14:45 -0000 1.4
@@ -202,8 +202,8 @@
</formalpara>
<screen><![CDATA[boot cd: /images/netboot/ppc32.img]]></screen>
<para>
- You must also configure OpenFirmware on the Pegasos manually
- to make the installed Fedora system bootable. To do this,
+ Manual configuration of the Open''''''Firmware on the
Pegasos
+ is required to make the installed Fedora system bootable. To do this,
set the <envar>boot-device</envar> and
<envar>boot-file</envar> environment variables
appropriately.
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@
<formalpara>
<title>Genesi Efika 5200B</title>
<para>
- In order to run Linux correctly on the Efika, the "Device Tree
Supplement" must be downloaded from <ulink
url='http://www.powerdeveloper.org/platforms/efika/devicetree'>...
and installed according to the documentation therein. At the time of writing, the firmware
of the Efika has bugs which prevent correct operation of the
<application>yaboot</application> bootloader. Genesi stated that a fixed
firmware would be made available by April 2007. As of November 2007, it is not yet
available.
+ To run Linux correctly on the Efika, download the "Device Tree
Supplement" from <ulink
url='http://www.powerdeveloper.org/platforms/efika/devicetree'>...
and installed according to the documentation therein. At the time of writing, the firmware
of the Efika has bugs which prevent correct operation of the
<application>yaboot</application> bootloader. Genesi stated that a fixed
firmware would be made available by April 2007. As of November 2007, it is not yet
available.
</para>
</formalpara>
</listitem>