Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13157
Modified Files: fedora-install-guide-en.xml Log Message: Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.15 retrieving revision 1.16 diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16 --- fedora-install-guide-en.xml 31 May 2005 19:11:54 -0000 1.15 +++ fedora-install-guide-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:10 -0000 1.16 @@ -4,16 +4,16 @@ <!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN SYSTEM "../common/fedora-entities-en.ent"> %FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN;
-<!ENTITY VERSION "0.7.1beta"> <!-- version for this document --> +<!ENTITY VERSION "1.0rc1"> <!-- version for this document -->
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "fedora-install-guide-en-&VERSION; (2005-05-18)"> <!-- change date here and VERSION entity everytime a change is made--> +<!ENTITY BOOKID "fedora-install-guide-en-&VERSION; (2005-06-08-T16:20-0700)"> <!-- change date here and VERSION entity everytime a change is made-->
<!ENTITY LEGALNOTICE SYSTEM "../common/legalnotice-en.xml">
<!-- Bugzilla bug number for the draft notice --> <!ENTITY BUG-NUM "129911"> <!ENTITY FCLOCALVER "4"> -<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "BETA"> +<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.0rc1"> <!ENTITY DRAFTNOTICE SYSTEM "../common/draftnotice-en.xml">
@@ -41,6 +41,7 @@ <book id="book" lang="en"> <bookinfo> <title>&FC; &FCLOCALVER; &IG; &DOCLOCALVER;</title> + <!-- Remove DOCLOCALVER for release --> <copyright> <year>2005</year> <holder>&FORMAL-RHI;</holder> @@ -93,6 +94,17 @@ </para> </revdescription> </revision> + <revision> + <revnumber>1.0rc1</revnumber> + <date>2005-06-08</date> + <authorinitials>KarstenWade</authorinitials> + <revdescription> + <para> + Publication edit and declaration of release candidate + </para> + </revdescription> + </revision> + </revhistory> </bookinfo>
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