Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/jargon-buster
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4026/jargon-buster
Modified Files:
jargon-buster-en.xml
Log Message:
quick style edit, bump to 1.9.3
Index: jargon-buster-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/jargon-buster/jargon-buster-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- jargon-buster-en.xml 7 Sep 2005 12:55:34 -0000 1.9
+++ jargon-buster-en.xml 7 Sep 2005 22:20:46 -0000 1.10
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN SYSTEM
"../docs-common/common/fedora-entities-en.ent">
%FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN;
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "jargon-buster-1.9.2 (2005-08-26)"> <!-- change
version of manual and date here -->
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "jargon-buster-1.9.3 (2005-09-07)"> <!-- change
version of manual and date here -->
]>
@@ -170,6 +170,16 @@
</para>
</revdescription>
</revision>
+ <revision>
+ <revnumber>1.9.3</revnumber>
+ <date>7 Sep 2005</date>
+ <authorinitials>PaulWFrields</authorinitials>
+ <revdescription>
+ <para>
+ Style editing.
+ </para>
+ </revdescription>
+ </revision>
</revhistory>
</articleinfo>
@@ -870,17 +880,16 @@
To use a disk device such as a CD, USB drive, or floppy
diskette, you must first <command>mount</command> it. &FED;
uses a single unified file system for all attached devices.
- This is in direct contrast to Windows systems, which use a
- "drive letter" for each disk device, such as
- <systemitem>A:</systemitem> or
<systemitem>C:</systemitem>.
- When you <command>mount</command> a disk device, its file
- system becomes part of the unified file system on &FED;.
- The device is mounted on a <firstterm>mount
- point</firstterm>, which is a directory that points to that
- device, such as <filename>/media/floppy</filename>. You
- must also unmount the file system before you eject or remove
- the disk, to insure all file information is safely written
- to the device.
+ Windows systems, on the other hand, use a "drive letter" for
+ each disk device, such as <systemitem>A:</systemitem> or
+ <systemitem>C:</systemitem>. When you
+ <command>mount</command> a disk device, its file system
+ becomes part of the unified file system on &FED;. The
+ device is mounted on a <firstterm>mount point</firstterm>,
+ which is a directory that points to that device, such as
+ <filename>/media/floppy</filename>. You must also unmount
+ the file system before you eject or remove the disk, to
+ insure all file information is safely written to the device.
</para>
<para>
Since these functions are often handled through
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