Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv6406
Modified Files:
ProjectOverview.xml
Log Message:
Good for FC6
Index: ProjectOverview.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/ProjectOverview.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- ProjectOverview.xml 24 Sep 2006 20:41:49 -0000 1.7
+++ ProjectOverview.xml 25 Sep 2006 11:55:16 -0000 1.8
@@ -21,13 +21,13 @@
provide an operating system more in line with the ideals of free
software and more appealing to the open source community. For more
information, refer to the Fedora Project website at
- <ulink
url='http://fedora.redhat.com/'/>.
+ <ulink
url='http://fedoraproject.org/'/>.
</para>
<para>
The Fedora Project is driven by the individuals that contribute to
- it. As a tester, developer, documenter or translator, you can make a
- difference. See
+ it. As a tester, developer, documenter, or translator, you can make a
+ difference. Refer to
<ulink
url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/HelpWanted'/> for details.
For information on the channels of communication for Fedora users
and contributors, refer to
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
</para>
<para>
- In order to talk on the <code>#fedora</code> channel, you will need
+ In order to talk on the <code>#fedora</code> channel, you need
to register your nickname, or <emphasis>nick</emphasis>.
Instructions are given when you <code>/join</code> the channel.
</para>