commit 7dae5c820dbc412abdf3e0b5b6251f2df46c9d7f
Author: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Aug 13 22:55:11 2014 +0200
Improve language and style
en-US/Opening_GUI_Applications.xml | 33 +++++++++++++++------------------
1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/Opening_GUI_Applications.xml b/en-US/Opening_GUI_Applications.xml
index b4c90bb..1591d3a 100644
--- a/en-US/Opening_GUI_Applications.xml
+++ b/en-US/Opening_GUI_Applications.xml
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
<note>
<title>File names vs Application names</title>
<para>
- Programs are opened from the command line using the name of executable file
provided in the program's package. An entry in the desktop menu will often be named
differently from the file it executes. For example, the GNOME disk management utility
appears in the menu as <application>Disks</application>, and the file it
executes is <filename>/usr/bin/gnome-disks</filename>.
+ Programs are opened from the command line using the name of the executable file
provided in the program's package. An entry in the desktop menu will often be named
differently from the file it executes. For example, the GNOME disk management utility
appears in the menu as <application>Disks</application>, and the file it
executes is <filename>/usr/bin/gnome-disks</filename>.
</para>
</note>
<para>
@@ -42,29 +42,29 @@
Font initialized: DATA/FONT/LiberationMono-Bold.ttf
- Current Video Mode: 3200x1080 32bit
-
+ Current Video Mode: 3200x1080 32bit
+
Xinerama/TwinView detected.
Screen count: 2
Screen #0: (0, 0) x (1920, 1080)
Screen #1: (1920, 0) x (1280, 1024)
-
+
Supported resolutions list:
- 640x480 16bit
- 640x480 32bit
- 640x480 0bit
+ 640x480 16bit
+ 640x480 32bit
+ 640x480 0bit
768x480 16bit
<output truncated></screen>
</example>
<para>
- To launch a graphical application, but fork the additional output into the
background and return the terminal for immediate use, use the shell's
<function>job control</function> feature.
+ To launch a graphical application, but fork the additional output into the
background and return the terminal for immediate use, use the shell's
<function>job control</function> feature.
<screen>
[fedorauser@localhost]$ <command>emacs foo.txt
&</command></screen>
</para>
<important>
<title>Ending a session</title>
<para>
- Applications that hold the command line prompt until they complete will close
when the terminal session ends, even if they are forked into the background.
+ Applications that hold the command line prompt until they complete will close
when the terminal session ends, even if they are forked into the background.
</para>
</important>
<para>
@@ -98,18 +98,18 @@ root 23874 0.0 0.0 109184 900 pts/21 S+ 15:35 0:00 grep
--color=au
Switch back to the TTY the graphical session is running on. Since the example
above shows <application>X</application> running on
<literal>vt1</literal>, pressing
<keycombo><keycap>Ctrl</keycap><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>F1</keycap></keycombo>
will return to the desktop environment.
</para>
</step>
- </procedure>
+ </procedure>
</section>
-
+
<section id="gui-alt_f2">
<title>
Launching Applications with
<keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>F2</keycap></keycombo>
</title>
- <para>
- Most desktop environments follow the convention of using the key combination
<keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>F2</keycap></keycombo>
for opening new applications. Pressing
<keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>F2</keycap></keycombo>
brings up a prompt for a command to be entered into.
+ <para>
+ Most desktop environments follow the convention of using the key combination
<keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>F2</keycap></keycombo>
for opening new applications. Pressing
<keycombo><keycap>Alt</keycap><keycap>F2</keycap></keycombo>
brings up a prompt for a command to be entered into.
</para>
<para>
- Commands entered into this dialog box function much as they would if entered in a
terminal. Applications are known by their file name, and can accept arguments.
+ Commands entered into this dialog box function much as they would if entered in a
terminal. Applications are known by their file name, and can accept arguments.
</para>
<figure id="fig-alt_f2-gnome">
<title>
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ root 23874 0.0 0.0 109184 900 pts/21 S+ 15:35 0:00 grep
--color=au
</mediaobject>
</figure>
<para>
- The <guilabel>overview</guilabel> can also be browsed. The bar on the
left, called the <guilabel>dash</guilabel>, shows frequently used applications
and grid icon. Clicking on the grid icon brings up a grid in the center of the window that
displays more frequent applications. The grid will display all available applications if
selected using the <guilabel>All</guilabel> button at the bottom of the
screen.
+ The <guilabel>overview</guilabel> can also be browsed. The bar on the
left, called the <guilabel>dash</guilabel>, shows frequently used applications
and a grid icon. Clicking on the grid icon brings up a grid in the center of the window
that displays frequently used applications. The grid will display all available
applications if selected using the <guilabel>All</guilabel> button at the
bottom of the screen.
</para>
<figure id="fig-menu-gnome">
<title>
@@ -333,6 +333,3 @@ root 23874 0.0 0.0 109184 900 pts/21 S+ 15:35 0:00 grep
--color=au
</section>
</section>
</chapter>
-
-
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