Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1240
Modified Files: intro.xml Log Message: small grammatical fixes
Index: intro.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/intro.xml,v retrieving revision 1.5 retrieving revision 1.6 diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6 --- intro.xml 6 May 2007 21:05:08 -0000 1.5 +++ intro.xml 6 May 2007 22:08:09 -0000 1.6 @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ <title>Introduction</title> <para>This guide covers installation of &DISTRO;, a Linux distribution built on free and open source software. This manual helps you - install &DISTRO; on desktops, laptops and servers. The installation + install &DISTRO; on desktops, laptops, and servers. The installation system is flexible enough to use even if you have no previous knowledge of Linux or computer networks. If you select default options, &DISTRO; provides a complete desktop operating system, @@ -42,23 +42,23 @@ <title>About This Document</title> <section id="sn-goals"> <title>Goals</title> - <para>This guide will help a reader:</para> + <para>This guide helps a reader:</para> <orderedlist> <listitem> - <para>understand how to locate the &DISTRO; distribution - online,</para> + <para>Understand how to locate the &DISTRO; distribution + online</para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>create configuration data that allows a computer to boot - &DISTRO;,</para> + <para>Create configuration data that allows a computer to boot + &DISTRO;</para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>understand and interact with the &DISTRO; installation - program, and</para> + <para>Understand and interact with the &DISTRO; installation + program</para> </listitem> <listitem> - <para>complete basic post-installation configuration of a - &DISTRO; system.</para> + <para>Complete basic post-installation configuration of a + &DISTRO; system</para> </listitem> </orderedlist> <tip> @@ -97,6 +97,6 @@ in &BZ;. To file a bug, fill in "&BZ-PROD;" as the Product, choose the name of this document from the Component list, and choose "devel" as the version. FDP volunteers receive your feedback, and - may contact you for additional information if necessary.</para> + may contact you for additional information, if necessary.</para> </section> </chapter>
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