commit bd1bf1f70a454879853219717622ad9158fa13f2
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc(a)redhat.com>
Date: Wed Sep 3 18:20:39 2014 +0200
Some cleanup in VNC chapter
en-US/VNC_Installations.xml | 16 ++++++++--------
1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml b/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml
index 4951366..3b6f438 100644
--- a/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml
+++ b/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- Boot the installation system and wait for the boot menu to
appear. In the menu, press the <keycap>Tab</keycap> key to edit boot options.
Append the <option>inst.vnc</option> option to end of the command line.
+ Boot the installation system and wait for the boot menu to
appear. In the menu, edit boot options (see <xref linkend="sect-boot-menu"
/>) and append the <option>inst.vnc</option> option to the end of the
command line.
</para>
<para>
Optionally, if you want to restrict VNC access to the
installation system, add the
<option>inst.vncpassword=<replaceable>PASSWORD</replaceable></option>
boot option as well. Replace <replaceable>PASSWORD</replaceable> with the
password you want to use for the installation. The VNC password must be between 6 and 8
characters long.
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
</step>
<step>
<para>
- Press <keycap>Enter</keycap> to start the
installation. The system will initialize the installation program and start the necessary
services. When the system is ready, you will see a message on the screen similar to the
following:
+ Start the installation using the edited options. The system will
initialize the installation program and start the necessary services. When the system is
ready, you will see a message on the screen similar to the following:
</para>
<screen>
<computeroutput>13:14:47 Please manually connect your VNC viewer to
192.168.100.131:5901 to begin the install.</computeroutput>
@@ -183,8 +183,8 @@
</para>
</step>
</procedure>
- <para>
- After you finish the procedure, a new window will open with the VNC
connection established, displaying the installation menu. In this window, you will be able
to use the <application>Anaconda</application> graphical interface the same
way you would use it when installing directly on the system.
+ <para>
+ When the connection is successfully established, a new window will open
on the system running the VNC viewer, displaying the installation menu. This window will
provide full remote access to the installer until the installation finishes and the system
reboots for the first time.
</para>
<para>
You can then proceed with <xref
linkend="chap-installing-using-anaconda" />.
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
<section id="sect-vnc-installations-connect-mode">
<title>Installing in VNC Connect Mode</title>
<para>
- VNC connect mode is when the system being installed initiates a
connection to the VNC viewer running on a remote system. Before you start, make sure the
remote system is configured to accept incoming connection on the port you want to use for
VNC. The exact way to make sure the connection will not be blocked depends on your network
and on your workstation's configuration. Information about configuring the firewall in
&PRODUCT; 7 is available in <ulink
url="https://access.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Ente...
Enterprise Linux 7 Networking Guide</ulink>.
+ VNC connect mode is when the system being installed initiates a
connection to the VNC viewer running on a remote system. Before you start, make sure the
remote system is configured to accept incoming connection on the port you want to use for
VNC. The exact way to make sure the connection will not be blocked depends on your network
and on your workstation's configuration. Information about configuring the firewall in
&PRODUCT; is available in the <citetitle>&PRODUCT;
Security Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT; Documentation
website</ulink>.
</para>
<procedure id="proc-vnc-installations-connect-mode">
<title>Starting VNC in Connect Mode</title>
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ Thu Feb 20 15:23:54 2014
</step>
<step>
<para>
- Boot the system being installed and wait for the boot menu to
appear. In the menu, press the <keycap>Tab</keycap> key to edit boot options.
Append the following options to the command line:
+ Boot the installation system and wait for the boot menu to
appear. In the menu, edit boot options (see <xref linkend="sect-boot-menu"
/>) and append the following options to the end of the command line:
</para>
<screen>
<option>inst.vnc
inst.vncconnect=<replaceable>HOST</replaceable>:<replaceable>PORT</replaceable></option>
@@ -240,10 +240,10 @@ Thu Feb 20 15:23:54 2014
</step>
<step>
<para>
- Press <keycap>Enter</keycap> to start the
installation. The system will initialize the installation program and start the necessary
services. Once the initialization is finished,
<application>Anaconda</application> will attempt to connect to the IP address
and port you provided in the previous step.
+ Start the installation. The system will initialize the
installation program and start the necessary services. Once the initialization is
finished, <application>Anaconda</application> will attempt to connect to the
IP address and port you provided in the previous step.
</para>
<para>
- When the connection is successfully established, a new window
will open on the system running the VNC viewer, displaying the installation menu. In this
window, you will be able to use the <application>Anaconda</application>
graphical interface the same way you would use it when installing directly on the system.
+ When the connection is successfully established, a new window
will open on the system running the VNC viewer, displaying the installation menu. This
window will provide full remote access to the installer until the installation finishes
and the system reboots for the first time.
</para>
</step>
</procedure>