commit aa6f7ee552c9e37fa49b4146b2523ad407fd5852
Author: Petr Bokoc <pbokoc(a)redhat.com>
Date: Tue Sep 16 00:19:31 2014 +0200
Bringing links to other guides into line
en-US/Introduction.xml | 16 ++++++++--------
en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml | 4 ++--
en-US/Troubleshooting.xml | 8 ++++----
en-US/VNC_Installations.xml | 2 +-
4 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/en-US/Introduction.xml b/en-US/Introduction.xml
index 57b239e..928d582 100644
--- a/en-US/Introduction.xml
+++ b/en-US/Introduction.xml
@@ -18,14 +18,14 @@
<section id="sect-introduction-about">
<title>About Fedora</title>
<para>
- To find out more about Fedora, visit the <ulink
url="http://fedoraproject.org/">Fedora Project Website</ulink>. Other
documentation describing additional topics related to Fedora is available at the <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">Fedora Documentation</ulink>
website. Also see the <ulink
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_Project_Wiki">Fedora Project
Wiki</ulink>.
+ To find out more about &PRODUCT;, visit the <ulink
url="http://fedoraproject.org/">&PRODUCT; Project Website</ulink>.
Other documentation describing additional topics related to &PRODUCT; is available at
<ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">&PRODUCT;
Documentation</ulink>. Also see the <ulink
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_Project_Wiki">&am...;
Project Wiki</ulink>.
</para>
</section>
<section id="sect-introduction-additional-help">
<title>Getting Additional Help</title>
<para>
- If you encounter any problems which are not described in documentation,
you might get help from members of the community - developers, users, and others. There
are many ways to get help - the Ask Fedora website, mailing lists, forums, or IRC; for a
summary of available resources, see the <ulink
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicating_and_getting_help&q...
and Getting Help</ulink> page on the Fedora wiki.
+ If you encounter any problems which are not described in documentation,
you might get help from members of the community - developers, users, and others. There
are many ways to get help: the Ask Fedora website, mailing lists, forums, or IRC. For a
summary of available resources, see the <ulink
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicating_and_getting_help&q...
and Getting Help</ulink> page on the &PRODUCT; wiki.
</para>
</section>
@@ -42,28 +42,28 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
- Understand how to locate the Fedora distribution online
+ Understand how to locate the &PRODUCT; distribution online
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- Create configuration data that allows a computer to boot Fedora
+ Create configuration data that allows a computer to boot
&PRODUCT;
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- Understand and interact with the Fedora installation program
+ Understand and interact with the &PRODUCT; installation
program
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- Complete basic post-installation configuration of a Fedora
system
+ Complete basic post-installation configuration of a &PRODUCT;
system
</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<note>
<para>
- This guide does not cover <emphasis>use</emphasis> of
Fedora. To learn how to use an installed Fedora system, see the other manuals available at
the <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">Fedora
Documentation</ulink> website.
+ This guide does not cover <emphasis>use</emphasis> of
&PRODUCT;. To learn how to use an installed &PRODUCT; system, see the other
manuals available at <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/">Fedora
Documentation</ulink>.
</para>
</note>
</section>
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
<section id="sect-introduction-target-audience">
<title>Target Audience</title>
<para>
- This guide is intended for Fedora users of all levels of experience.
However, it describes the installation process and its many options in far greater detail
than most users are likely to require. You do not need to read and understand this entire
document to install Fedora on a computer. This document is most likely to help experienced
users perform advanced and unusual installations.
+ This guide is intended for &PRODUCT; users of all levels of
experience. However, it describes the installation process and its many options in far
greater detail than most users are likely to require. You do not need to read and
understand this entire document to install &PRODUCT; on a computer. This document is
most likely to help experienced users perform advanced and unusual installations.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml
b/en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml
index da789f0..f4dc714 100644
--- a/en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml
+++ b/en-US/Network_based_Installations.xml
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
<section id="pxe-overview">
<title>PXE Installation Overview</title>
<para>
- Pre-Execution Environment, or PXE, is a techonology that allows computers to boot
directly from resources provided over the network. Installing Fedora over the network
means you don't have to create media, and you can install to multiple computers or
virtual machine simultaneously. The process involves a number of components and features
working together to provide the resources required.
+ Preboot Execution Environment, or PXE, is a techonology that allows computers to
boot directly from resources provided over the network. Installing Fedora over the
network means you don't have to create media, and you can install to multiple
computers or virtual machine simultaneously. The process involves a number of components
and features working together to provide the resources required.
</para>
<formalpara>
<title>PXE-capable computer</title>
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ menuentry 'Rescue installed system' --class fedora --class
gnu-linux --class gn
The examples in this section use the public Fedora mirrors as the package
source. For faster installations, installing to many systems, or more isolated
environments, you may wish to maintain a local repository.
</para>
<para>
- Fedora Infrastructure maintains instructions for a configuring a local
mirror at <ulink
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Infrastructure/Mirroring" />. The
preferred method for providing repositories is via HTTP, and you can refer to the Fedora
<citetitle>System Adminsitrators Guide</citetitle> for Fedora &PRODVER; to
configure <systemitem class="daemon">httpd</systemitem>.
+ Fedora Infrastructure maintains instructions for a configuring a local
mirror at <ulink
url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Infrastructure/Mirroring" />. The
preferred method for providing repositories is via HTTP, and you can refer to the
<citetitle>Fedora System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at
<ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora
Documentation</ulink>, to configure <systemitem
class="daemon">httpd</systemitem>.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml b/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml
index 21531c7..eb41d2e 100644
--- a/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml
+++ b/en-US/Troubleshooting.xml
@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ GRUB_CMDLINE_LINUX="rd.lvm.lv=rhel/root rd.md=0 rd.dm=0
vconsole.keymap=us $([ -
After you finish this procedure, you can reboot your computer.
&PRODUCT; will not use the graphical boot sequence any more. If you wish to enable
graphical boot, follow the same procedure, add the <literal>rhgb</literal>
option to the <literal>GRUB_CMDLINE_LINUX</literal> line in the
<filename>/etc/default/grub</filename> file and refresh the boot loader
configuration again using the <command>grub2-mkconfig</command> command.
</para>
<para>
- See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's
Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora Documentation
website</ulink>, for more information about working with the
<application>GRUB2</application> boot loader.
+ See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's
Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT;
Documentation</ulink>, for more information about working with the
<application>GRUB2</application> boot loader.
</para>
</section>
@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@ GRUB_CMDLINE_LINUX="rd.lvm.lv=rhel/root rd.md=0 rd.dm=0
vconsole.keymap=us $([ -
<prompt>#</prompt> <command>systemctl set-default
multi-user.target</command>
</screen>
<para>
- For more information about targets in
<application>systemd</application>, see the <citetitle>&PRODUCT;
System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora Documentation
website</ulink>.
+ For more information about targets in
<application>systemd</application>, see the <citetitle>&PRODUCT;
System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT;
Documentation</ulink>.
</para>
</section>
@@ -677,7 +677,7 @@ tmpfs 1.8G 2.6M 1.8G 1%
/tmp
Some hardware configurations have a part of the system's RAM
reserved and unavailable to the main system. Notably, laptop computers with integrated
graphics cards will reserve some memory for the GPU. For example, a laptop with
4 GB of RAM and an integrated Intel graphics card will show only roughly
3.7 GB of available memory, even with a 64-bit system.
</para>
<para>
- Additionally, the <application>kdump</application> crash
kernel dumping mechanism reserves some memory for the secondary kernel used in case of the
primary kernel crashing. This reserved memory will also not be displayed as available when
using the <command>free</command> command. For details about
<application>kdump</application> and its memory requirements, see the
<citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>,
available at the <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora
Documentation website</ulink>.
+ Additionally, the <application>kdump</application> crash
kernel dumping mechanism reserves some memory for the secondary kernel used in case of the
primary kernel crashing. This reserved memory will also not be displayed as available when
using the <command>free</command> command. For details about
<application>kdump</application> and its memory requirements, see the
<citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's Guide</citetitle>,
available at <ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT;
Documentation</ulink>.
</para>
</note>
<para>
@@ -744,7 +744,7 @@ GRUB_CMDLINE_LINUX="rd.lvm.lv=rhel/root
vconsole.font=latarcyrheb-sun16 rd.lvm.l
GRUB_DISABLE_RECOVERY="true"
</programlisting>
<para>
- See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's
Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">Fedora Documentation
website</ulink>, for more information about working with the
<application>GRUB2</application> boot loader.
+ See the <citetitle>&PRODUCT; System Administrator's
Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT;
Documentation</ulink>, for more information about working with the
<application>GRUB2</application> boot loader.
</para>
</section>
diff --git a/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml b/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml
index 75adc01..7178b9f 100644
--- a/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml
+++ b/en-US/VNC_Installations.xml
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
<section id="sect-vnc-installations-connect-mode">
<title>Installing in VNC Connect Mode</title>
<para>
- VNC connect mode is when the system being installed initiates a
connection to the VNC viewer running on a remote system. Before you start, make sure the
remote system is configured to accept incoming connection on the port you want to use for
VNC. The exact way to make sure the connection will not be blocked depends on your network
and on your workstation's configuration. Information about configuring the firewall in
&PRODUCT; is available in the <citetitle>&PRODUCT;
Security Guide</citetitle>, available at the <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT; Documentation
website</ulink>.
+ VNC connect mode is when the system being installed initiates a
connection to the VNC viewer running on a remote system. Before you start, make sure the
remote system is configured to accept incoming connection on the port you want to use for
VNC. The exact way to make sure the connection will not be blocked depends on your network
and on your workstation's configuration. Information about configuring the firewall in
&PRODUCT; is available in the <citetitle>&PRODUCT;
Security Guide</citetitle>, available at <ulink
url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org">&PRODUCT;
Documentation</ulink>.
</para>
<procedure id="proc-vnc-installations-connect-mode">
<title>Starting VNC in Connect Mode</title>