Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13180
Modified Files: fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml Log Message: Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits. Some notes about this review: this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.
Index: fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.8 retrieving revision 1.9 diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9 --- fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml 27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000 1.8 +++ fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml 9 Jun 2005 00:18:16 -0000 1.9 @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
<para> Avoid disabling the firewall. If you believe it is necessary to - do so, however, select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>. + do so, select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>. </para>
<tip>