[install-guide] spellcheck, rhbz#1267789
by Pete Travis
commit 0f5729683f49478d0370ed5701a76c7107c5a2cc
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Thu Oct 8 13:36:05 2015 -0500
spellcheck, rhbz#1267789
en-US/DateTimeSpoke.xml | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/DateTimeSpoke.xml b/en-US/DateTimeSpoke.xml
index 1286575..f95cdda 100644
--- a/en-US/DateTimeSpoke.xml
+++ b/en-US/DateTimeSpoke.xml
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
</para>
</note>
<para>
- The switch labeled <guilabel>Network Time</guilabel> in the top right corner of the screen can be used to enable or disable network time synchronization using the Network Time Protol (NTP). Enabling this option will keep your system time correct as long as the system can access the internet. By default, four NTP <firstterm>pools</firstterm> are configured; you can add others and disable or remove the default ones by clicking the gear wheel button next to the switch.
+ The switch labeled <guilabel>Network Time</guilabel> in the top right corner of the screen can be used to enable or disable network time synchronization using the Network Time Protocol (NTP). Enabling this option will keep your system time correct as long as the system can access the internet. By default, four NTP <firstterm>pools</firstterm> are configured; you can add others and disable or remove the default ones by clicking the gear wheel button next to the switch.
</para>
<figure>
<title>The Add and mark for usage NTP servers dialog</title>
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[install-guide] keyboard spoke correction, rhbz#1267791
by Pete Travis
commit 3a83c82d2c32781913ae82305a38d42ba83b1891
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Thu Oct 8 13:33:40 2015 -0500
keyboard spoke correction, rhbz#1267791
en-US/KeyboardSpoke.xml | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/KeyboardSpoke.xml b/en-US/KeyboardSpoke.xml
index 2739e3b..97c0ad3 100644
--- a/en-US/KeyboardSpoke.xml
+++ b/en-US/KeyboardSpoke.xml
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
<para>
- The right half of the screen contains a window listing all currently configured layouts. The order in which the layouts are displayed is important - the same order will be used when switching between layouts, and the first listed layout will be the default on your system.
+ The left half of the screen contains a window listing all currently configured layouts. The order in which the layouts are displayed is important - the same order will be used when switching between layouts, and the first listed layout will be the default on your system.
</para>
<para>
The text field on the right side of the screen can be used to test the currently selected layout.
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[install-guide] grammar adjustment to storage spoke, rhbz#1269294
by Pete Travis
commit 85ebbf7ddd7669ab98d8646eb7e0bc06d37930c9
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Thu Oct 8 13:22:10 2015 -0500
grammar adjustment to storage spoke, rhbz#1269294
en-US/StorageSpoke.xml | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/StorageSpoke.xml b/en-US/StorageSpoke.xml
index 360edae..60e3a84 100644
--- a/en-US/StorageSpoke.xml
+++ b/en-US/StorageSpoke.xml
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
In the top part of the screen, all locally available storage devices (SATA, IDE and SCSI hard drives, USB flash drives, etc.) are displayed in the <guilabel>Local Standard Disks</guilabel> section. Local disks are detected when the installer starts - any storage devices connected after the installation has started will not be shown.
</para>
<para>
- If you need to additional local storage devices, select <guilabel>I will configure partitioning</guilabel> and press <guilabel>Done</guilabel> to move to <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning" />. Then, connect any new hard drives you want to make available during the installation, and press the button marked by a circular arrow in the set of controls below the list of mount points on the left side of the screen. In the dialog window that opens, press <guilabel>Rescan Disks</guilabel> and wait until the scanning process completes. Then, press <guilabel>OK</guilabel> to return to <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-storage-partitioning" />; all detected disks including any new ones will be displayed in the <guilabel>Local Standard Disks</guilabel> section.
+ If you need to configure additional local storage devices, select <guilabel>I will configure partitioning</guilabel> and press <guilabel>Done</guilabel> to move to <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning" />. Then, connect any new hard drives you want to make available during the installation, and press the button marked by a circular arrow in the set of controls below the list of mount points on the left side of the screen. In the dialog window that opens, press <guilabel>Rescan Disks</guilabel> and wait until the scanning process completes. Then, press <guilabel>OK</guilabel> to return to <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-storage-partitioning" />; all detected disks including any new ones will be displayed in the <guilabel>Local Standard Disks</guilabel> section.
</para>
<para>
The <guilabel>Specialized & Network Disks</guilabel> section below shows advanced network storage (such as iSCSI and FCoE disks) currently configured. When you first open this screen, no such devices will be displayed because they can not be automatically detected; to search for network storage devices <guilabel>Add a disk</guilabel> button and proceed with <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-installation-destination" />. Any network storage you configure will then show up in the <guilabel>Specialized & Network Disks</guilabel> the same way local disks are shown above.
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[install-guide] minor grammar adjustment, rhbz#1269686
by Pete Travis
commit 0a3b940340952ea29b33a41d6c6e11f0171545dd
Author: Pete Travis <immanetize(a)fedoraproject.org>
Date: Thu Oct 8 13:19:27 2015 -0500
minor grammar adjustment, rhbz#1269686
en-US/CustomSpoke.xml | 2 +-
1 files changed, 1 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/en-US/CustomSpoke.xml b/en-US/CustomSpoke.xml
index 13d12d9..33e96e2 100644
--- a/en-US/CustomSpoke.xml
+++ b/en-US/CustomSpoke.xml
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
The exact steps for configuring your storage depend on your specific needs and your system configuration. Procedures for creating specific layouts are described further in this chapter. Before you start, you should also review <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning-recommended" /> and <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-manual-partitioning-advice" /> for a list of requirements and tips for partitioning your disks for &PRODUCT;.
</para>
<para>
- Below the list of existing mount points two fields, showing you how much free space is left on your storage devices, and how much total space they have.
+ Below the list of existing mount points are two fields, showing you how much free space is left on your storage devices and how much total space they have.
</para>
<para>
Click the <guilabel><replaceable>X</replaceable> storage devices selected</guilabel> to view a summary of currently selected storage devices; this may help you with orientation in more complicated storage schemas. Devices displayed here are the ones you have selected in <xref linkend="sect-installation-gui-storage-partitioning" />. If you want to add or remove any storage devices from your configuration, return to that screen and change your selection.
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