Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv19469
Modified Files: fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml Log Message: Trivial style edits
Index: fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.22 retrieving revision 1.23 diff -u -r1.22 -r1.23 --- fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 10 Dec 2005 17:51:38 -0000 1.22 +++ fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 10 Dec 2005 22:54:33 -0000 1.23 @@ -293,8 +293,9 @@ <firstterm>netboot</firstterm>) is a standard that enables PCs to use files on a server as a boot device. &FC; includes utilities that allow it to function as a PXE server for other - computers. This option enables you to install &FC; entirely over - the network connection, using no physical media at all. + computers. You can use this option to install &FC; on a + PXE-enabled computer entirely over the network connection, using + no physical media at all. </para> </section>
@@ -396,7 +397,7 @@ </itemizedlist>
<para> - This facility enables you to install &FC; on machines without + You can use this facility to install &FC; on machines without using installation discs. For example, you may install &FC; on a laptop with no CD or DVD drive by booting the machine with a USB pen drive, and then using a hard drive as an installation source.
Index: fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml,v retrieving revision 1.17 retrieving revision 1.18 diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18 --- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 10 Dec 2005 17:51:39 -0000 1.17 +++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 10 Dec 2005 22:54:33 -0000 1.18 @@ -156,9 +156,9 @@ Once you have booted your computer, you may use ISO image files of the &FED; discs to continue the installation process. The ISO files must be located on a hard drive that is either internal to - the computer, or attached to the machine by USB. This option - enables you to install &FC; on computers that have neither a - network connection, nor CD or DVD drives. + the computer, or attached to the machine by USB. You can use this + option to install &FC; on computers that have neither a network + connection nor CD or DVD drives. </para>
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