Nice Job, Ben.
One change I would make ... under KDE:
"The new shutdown dialog allows users with multiple operating systems
can select which one to reboot to."
I would reword that a little. Perhaps something along the lines of
"A new shutdown dialog allows users with multiple operating systems to
select the reboot OS."
although simply replacing "can" with "to" would get 99% of the way
there.
--McD
On Mon, 2011-10-24 at 20:34 -0400, Ben Cotton wrote:
Hey gang,
I've written up a draft of the release announcement for Fedora 16
since I volunteered for it in the meeting today. The draft can be
found at:
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F16_release_announcement
I did what I could based on the talking points and the feature list.
If you have any suggestions or edits, please feel free to edit the
wiki page. I've never written RAs before, and it turns out to be kind
of fun, so if you'd like to provide some constructive criticism
on-list, or out-of-band, I'd be glad to hear it!
Thanks,
BC
--
Ben Cotton