On Mon, 2006-01-23 at 23:38 +0000, David Fletcher wrote:
I set up an email box specifically for use with this email list just
a few
days ago.
I submitted some work to the list on Friday that I've not yet had a response
to,
This is the one that puzzles me. :)
You might have filtered out this reply?
http://www.redhat.com/archives/fedora-docs-list/2006-January/msg00171.html
In general it looks quite good. A few small passive -> active voice
changes (changing "will happen" to "happens", for example). Dropping
references to mp3s, etc.
What Rahul suggests is good, the fedora-release maintainer needs to own
the source of the document, and bring it to us for final clean-up.
Thanks a million for carrying this need over from the fedora-list
discussions/rest of the community.
cheers - Karsten
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