On Sat, 20.10.12 23:12, Matthew Miller (mattdm(a)fedoraproject.org) wrote:
Heya,
On Sun, Oct 21, 2012 at 01:50:59AM +0200, Lennart Poettering wrote:
> The format is documented now:
>
http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/journal-files
Cool. I think that will address many people's concerns.
I have some incredibly small non-technical grammar suggestions for the
document, which I've included below as a diff. Some of these are just commas
for clarity in log clauses, but others are minor word-choice issues. I don't
think I've altered meaning anywhere.
It's a wiki! Can I convince you to just edit the page directly and apply
your fixes? It requires you to create an fdo wiki account (which is
unrestricted, quick and free), but after that you can make changes as
necessary without restrictions, and I invite to you to fix typos,
grammar issues and suchlike right-away!
The HTML diff unfortunately I don't really know how to apply...
Thanks!
Lennart
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Lennart Poettering - Red Hat, Inc.