Much more thanks to Stephen for providing an article. 🙂
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Gregory Lee Bartholomew
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On March 11, 2020 1:20:24 PM UTC, Stephen Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>Yes, thanks to Gregory
>On Wed, 2020-03-11 at 07:09 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
>> Great work! Thanks for saving the day!
>>
>> Scheduled.
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Mar 11, 2020 at 12:03 AM Gregory Lee Bartholomew <
>> gregory.lee.bartholomew(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>> > I've added an image to it, but it is not scheduled because I could
>> > not find the
>> >
>> > button to do so in Wordpress.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > Adam: Hopefully you can take care of any last minute tweaking and
>> > schedule it
>> >
>> > sometime before 8:00AM tomorrow.
>> >
>> >
>> >
>> > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 16:44 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
>> >
>> > > No problem. I've removed the links. Just let me know if you spot
>> > anything else,
>> >
>> > > no matter how small. It is much easier to update now than after
>> > it goes live.
>> >
>> > >
>> >
>> > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:06 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
>> >
>> > > > Yeah the SEO score is something is difficult sometimes. I
don't
>> > usually
>> >
>> > > > sweat it too much as long as the read is okay. Didn't read
the
>> > tips,
>> >
>> > > > just started writing, but I'll take your word for it.
>> >
>> > > >
>> >
>> > > > The article looks okay, the only thing is there is a link that
>> >
>> > > > shouldn't be one (
http://localhost:8080/logo.html) is meant
to
>> > be
>> >
>> > > > something typed in the browser url entry. Maybe it's a WP
thing
>> > though
>> >
>> > > > I didn't notice it before.
>> >
>> > > >
>> >
>> > > > Thanks Gregory
>> >
>> > > >
>> >
>> > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 15:45 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew
>> > wrote:
>> >
>> > > > > Hi Stephen:
>> >
>> > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm
trying to
>> > bring
>> >
>> > > > > it into
>> >
>> > > > > better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g.
using
>> >
>> > > > > sentence case
>> >
>> > > > > instead of title case):
>> >
>> > > > >
>> >
>> > > > >
>> >
>https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/
>> >
>> > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend
>> > using
>> >
>> > > > > sentence case for
>> >
>> > > > > the section titles (even though they aren't sentences
:P)
>> >
>> > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the
>> > imperative tense
>> >
>> > > > > to make
>> >
>> > > > > the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO
>> > happy. I
>> >
>> > > > > don't think
>> >
>> > > > > it is really designed for scoring technical articles.
>> >
>> > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > Can you view the current version of your article here?:
>> >
>> > > > >
>> >
>> > > > >
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=30428&preview=1&_ppp=5d183dabb1
>> >
>> > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think
>> > might be
>> >
>> > > > > poorly or
>> >
>> > > > > incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the
image
>> > now.
>> >
>> > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
>> >
>> > > > > > Hello Gregory,
>> >
>> > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > No I haven't an idea what image to use for it.
Sorry, I
>> > know that's
>> >
>> > > > > > not
>> >
>> > > > > > a great help. It is a container focused platform, and
suits
>> >
>> > > > > > Silverblue
>> >
>> > > > > > (and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric
container
>> >
>> > > > > > build/run
>> >
>> > > > > > options. Perhaps something from the container world
would
>> > be
>> >
>> > > > > > suitable.
>> >
>> > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > Stephen
>> >
>> > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee
Bartholomew
>> > wrote:
>> >
>> > > > > > > Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and
then request
>> > your
>> >
>> > > > > > > feedback. In the
>> >
>> > > > > > > meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
>> >
>> > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow
wrote:
>> >
>> > > > > > > > If you need me to revise anything please
advise me, I'm
>> > around
>> >
>> > > > > > > > to
>> >
>> > > > > > > > take
>> >
>> > > > > > > > care of it.
>> >
>> > > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > > Stephen
>> >
>> > > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory
Lee
>> > Bartholomew
>> >
>> > > > > > > > wrote:
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > This one looks pretty easy and I could
use the
>> > practice
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > anyway,
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > so
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > I'll give it
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > a try.
>> >
>> > > > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam
Samalik
>> > wrote:
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > Hi all,
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > I promised an article for Wednesday
about one of
>> > the
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > desktops
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > from
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > Troy's
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > article [1], but other things
slipped and I won't
>> > be able
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > to do
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > that. :(
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > However, there is this Quarkus
article [2] ready to
>> > be
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > reviewed!
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > Would
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > anyone be able to give it an edit
and an image, so
>> > it's
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > ready
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > for
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > tomorrow?
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > As a backup, I could try to do that
in the morning
>> > if time
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > allows.
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > Thanks!
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > Adam
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > [1]
>> >
https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > [2]
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > >
>> >
>https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?kanban-status=196
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > --
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > >
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > Adam Å amalÃk
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > ---------------------------
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > Senior Software Engineer
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > > Red Hat
>> >
>> > > > > > > > > >
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