I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that more
active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about,"
etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up
too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
fine-tuning.
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>
> I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability
> score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content
> or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to
> bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last
> night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is
> everything some days.
>
> SDS
>
> On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
> > Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
> > though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
> > help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
> > passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
> > rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at
> > the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
> > sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
> >
> > Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
> > reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
> > Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
> > array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
> >
> > Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
> > subheadings for more readability.
> >
> > There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
> > engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
> > will publish since no one scheduled it already.
> >
> >
> > Paul
> >
> > On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com> wrote:
> >> You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I
couldn't
> >> try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands
> >> and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
> >>
> >>
> >> On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> >>> Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is
a
> >>> definite improvement. :-)
> >>>
> >>> On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
> >>>> Edited the mdadm
> >>>> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> >>>>> Minutes:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>> Minutes (text):
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>> Log:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * * *
> >>>>> =========================================
> >>>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
> >>>>> =========================================
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
> >>>>> available at
> >>>>>
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
> >>>>> .
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Meeting summary
> >>>>> ---------------
> >>>>> * Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
> >>>>> * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from
previous
> >>>>> week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
> >>>>> * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either
(stickster,
> >>>>> 20:05:56)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
> >>>>> * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social
network
> >>>>> access (stickster, 20:11:52)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
> >>>>> * LINK:
> >>>>>
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:12:32)
> >>>>> * --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
> >>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:13:58)
> >>>>> * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:15:19)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
> >>>>> * LINK:
> >>>>>
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:16:30)
> >>>>> * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
(stickster,
> >>>>> 20:25:01)
> >>>> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
> >>>> jakfrost
> >>>>> * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster,
20:26:05)
> >>>>> * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24)
> >>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:26:42)
> >>>>> * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT
article for
> >>>>> Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35)
> >>>>> * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03)
> >>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:34:22)
> >>>>> * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:36:28)
> >>>>> * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster,
20:37:30)
> >>>>> * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on
status
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:42:34)
> >>>>> * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
properly
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:42:45)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
> >>>>> * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
> >>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
> >>>>> (stickster, 20:47:31)
> >>>>> * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and
get them
> >>>>> into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> * Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
> >>>>> * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s
(ryanlerch)
> >>>>> -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) --
Fri Apr 19:
> >>>>> FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Action Items
> >>>>> ------------
> >>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
access
> >>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
> >>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
Monday Apr
> >>>>> 15
> >>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
> >>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
> >>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
into
> >>>>> drafting
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Action Items, by person
> >>>>> -----------------------
> >>>>> * jakfrost
> >>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
> >>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
into
> >>>>> drafting
> >>>>> * ryanlerch
> >>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
> >>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article
for Monday
> >>>>> Apr 15
> >>>>> * stickster
> >>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
access
> >>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
> >>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
> >>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
> >>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
properly
> >>>>> * **UNASSIGNED**
> >>>>> * (none)
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> People Present (lines said)
> >>>>> ---------------------------
> >>>>> * stickster (109)
> >>>>> * jakfrost (18)
> >>>>> * ryanlerch (14)
> >>>>> * zodbot (12)
> >>>>> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
> >>>>> * sdgathman (6)
> >>>>> * pjones (2)
> >>>>> * asamalik (0)
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Generated by `MeetBot`_ 0.1.4
> >>>>>
> >>>>> .. _`MeetBot`:
http://wiki.debian.org/MeetBot
> >>>>>
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