Yeah the readability score was a difficult one to raise, and I gave up
sort of except for the outro. I decided to fall back to what you had
said before "Don't get caught up on technicalities" the schedule must go
on.
On 17/04/19 08:55 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
I saw the snippet after I wrote this -- thanks! I also made that
more
active, with a call-to-action (such as "Learn how to," "Read about,"
etc.). Let me know if some of the changes I made make sense. The
passive/active part takes some practice, it's not always easy. In
fact, I couldn't get that to go "green" without goofing the text up
too much. As i said, the article was a good one so these are all just
fine-tuning.
Paul
On Wed, Apr 17, 2019 at 8:32 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com> wrote:
> I did use the Yoast SEO, and I worked at trying to get the readability
> score up, for all of Sunday morning,without tainting the actual content
> or message the author was posting about. I did add to the Snippet to
> bring it into the green zone. As for scheduling, I meant to publish last
> night but there were some matters pressing I had to attend to. Timing is
> everything some days.
>
> SDS
>
> On 17/04/19 08:26 AM, Paul Frields wrote:
>> Overall I think this article turned out very good. A couple points,
>> though... I recommend using the Yoast SEO and readability plugins to
>> help guide writing. For instance, this article shows up with too many
>> passive voice sentences. In that case, it's useful to go back and
>> rewrite to make the prose stronger. If you can put "by Klingons" at
>> the end of the sentence and it makes grammatical and syntactical
>> sense, it's passive voice. So for example:
>>
>> Passive: Using the --rebuild option, the RAID array can be
>> reassembled. ["...by Klingons" works, so rewrite.]
>> Active (better): Use the --rebuild option to reassemble the RAID
>> array. ["...by Klingons" test fails.]
>>
>> Also the plugin notes this article could use some breaking up with
>> subheadings for more readability.
>>
>> There's also a snippet that should be filled out for SEO, so search
>> engines show the right kind of excerpt. I made a few tweaks and
>> will publish since no one scheduled it already.
>>
>>
>> Paul
>>
>> On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:15 AM Steven Snow <s40w5s(a)gmail.com> wrote:
>>> You're welcome Gregory, interesting topic and good article. I
couldn't
>>> try it out though which sort of sucks, but that is my setup as it stands
>>> and nothing to do with the topic. :-)
>>>
>>>
>>> On 15/04/19 10:14 AM, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
>>>> Thanks Steven. I think the way you re-phrased some of the statements is
a
>>>> definite improvement. :-)
>>>>
>>>> On Sun, 2019-04-14 at 10:52 -0400, Steven Snow wrote:
>>>>> Edited the mdadm
>>>>> On 10/04/19 04:59 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
>>>>>> Minutes:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>>>>>> Minutes (text):
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>>>>>> Log:
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>>>>>>
>>>>>> * * *
>>>>>> =========================================
>>>>>> #fedora-meeting: Magazine editorial board
>>>>>> =========================================
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Meeting started by stickster at 20:02:01 UTC. The full logs are
>>>>>> available at
>>>>>>
https://meetbot.fedoraproject.org/fedora-meeting/2019-04-10/magazine.2019...
>>>>>> .
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Meeting summary
>>>>>> ---------------
>>>>>> * Roll call (stickster, 20:02:05)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> * Last week stats (stickster, 20:04:09)
>>>>>> * Week of April 1: 77.3K pageviews, up significantly from
previous
>>>>>> week 63K (stickster, 20:04:38)
>>>>>> * March 2019 - over 295K pageviews, not too shabby either
(stickster,
>>>>>> 20:05:56)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> * Social network access (stickster, 20:07:43)
>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster email bkp to see about extending social
network
>>>>>> access (stickster, 20:11:52)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> * Pending review posts (stickster, 20:12:18)
>>>>>> * LINK:
>>>>>>
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=pending
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:12:32)
>>>>>> * --- How do you Fedora? --- (stickster, 20:13:38)
>>>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=27043&preview=1&_ppp=fc778750cc
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:13:58)
>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:15:19)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> * Drafts to review (stickster, 20:16:28)
>>>>>> * LINK:
>>>>>>
https://fedoramagazine.org/wp-admin/edit.php?post_status=draft&orderb...
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:16:30)
>>>>>> * ACTION: jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
(stickster,
>>>>>> 20:25:01)
>>>>> Edited 20190414095900 Needs an image I think.
>>>>> jakfrost
>>>>>> * ACTION: ryanlerch do image for mdadm article (stickster,
20:26:05)
>>>>>> * --- K3s on Fedora IoT --- (stickster, 20:26:24)
>>>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25824&preview=1&_ppp=837d26e2cf
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:26:42)
>>>>>> * ACTION: ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT
article for
>>>>>> Monday Apr 15 (stickster, 20:31:35)
>>>>>> * --- FFSend --- (stickster, 20:32:03)
>>>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=25821&preview=1&_ppp=b5ece44cfd
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:34:22)
>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:36:28)
>>>>>> * --- converted video to DVD on Fedora --- (stickster,
20:37:30)
>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster email DVD article author to advise on
status
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:42:34)
>>>>>> * ACTION: stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
properly
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:42:45)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> * Pitches to review (stickster, 20:47:18)
>>>>>> * --- Tuning shell on WS/SB --- (stickster, 20:47:29)
>>>>>> * LINK:
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=26993&preview=1&_ppp=2040644edc
>>>>>> (stickster, 20:47:31)
>>>>>> * ACTION: jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and
get them
>>>>>> into drafting (stickster, 20:53:52)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> * Publishing schedule! (stickster, 20:55:46)
>>>>>> * AGREED: Fri Apr 12: HDYF (stickster) -- Mon Apr 15: K3s
(ryanlerch)
>>>>>> -- Wed Apr 17: mdadm (jakfrost edit, ryanlerch image) --
Fri Apr 19:
>>>>>> FFSend (stickster) (stickster, 20:58:02)
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Meeting ended at 20:58:22 UTC.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Action Items
>>>>>> ------------
>>>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
access
>>>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish 2019-04-12
>>>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
>>>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
>>>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article for
Monday Apr
>>>>>> 15
>>>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri 2019-Apr-19
>>>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
>>>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated properly
>>>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them into
>>>>>> drafting
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Action Items, by person
>>>>>> -----------------------
>>>>>> * jakfrost
>>>>>> * jakfrost edit the mdadm primer article
>>>>>> * jakfrost email pitch author for shell tuning and get them
into
>>>>>> drafting
>>>>>> * ryanlerch
>>>>>> * ryanlerch do image for mdadm article
>>>>>> * ryanlerch edit/image/schedule K3s on Fedora IoT article
for Monday
>>>>>> Apr 15
>>>>>> * stickster
>>>>>> * stickster email bkp to see about extending social network
access
>>>>>> * stickster edit newest HDYF article and publish
2019-04-12
>>>>>> * stickster edit/image for FFSend article for Fri
2019-Apr-19
>>>>>> * stickster email DVD article author to advise on status
>>>>>> * stickster see if plugin for edit-flow is updated
properly
>>>>>> * **UNASSIGNED**
>>>>>> * (none)
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> People Present (lines said)
>>>>>> ---------------------------
>>>>>> * stickster (109)
>>>>>> * jakfrost (18)
>>>>>> * ryanlerch (14)
>>>>>> * zodbot (12)
>>>>>> * gregbartholomew_ (11)
>>>>>> * sdgathman (6)
>>>>>> * pjones (2)
>>>>>> * asamalik (0)
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Generated by `MeetBot`_ 0.1.4
>>>>>>
>>>>>> .. _`MeetBot`:
http://wiki.debian.org/MeetBot
>>>>>>
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