Hi,
Is there a way to see the original article? I don't remember what
exactly said, I do remember it was meant to be a series and that it had
more stuff but not exactly what or how.
Cheers,Sylvia
On Sun, 2017-02-05 at 00:18 +0000, Corey W Sheldon wrote:
> Paul Frields:
> > The original article beforeediting didn't have any direct hints
> > about
> > specific utilities, commands to run, etc. So I tried to keep the
> > same
> > sense around the article that Sylvia, the original author,
> > intended.
> > In some cases, there were two separate and distinct tips combined
> > into
> > one, so I separated them for clarity. I also tried to order them in
> > terms of "depth" for where they took the user.
> >
> > I did look at the revisions Corey saved. Those revisions were light
> > and didn't alter that general feel. I didn't see anything in those
> > revisions that mentioned specific tools or commands. Perhaps
> > there's
> > an unsaved copy that didn't make it into the Wordpress instance?
> >
> > I would agree with Eduard and Link the article is fairly general. I
> > tried to clarify what was there, put it in an order that would make
> > as
> > much sense to the reader as possible, make it concise for the
> > typical
> > modern reader (as well as international/ESL audiences), and keep
> > the
> > sense of the original author's work.
> >
> > Paul
> >
> >
> > On Sat, Feb 4, 2017 at 4:26 PM, Eduard Lucena <eduardlucena(a)gmail.c
> > om> wrote:
> > > Hi team,
> > >
> > > Maybe I'm out of scope here, but I need to agreed with Link: How
> > > is this
> > > related with Fedora or any open source or free software? An
> > > article about
> > > scurity tips isn't good just because it has the word cryptography
> > > on it.
> > > The tips given are just superficial, it doesn't have anything
> > > specific
> > > about a browser or any software, how something differs from one
> > > to another,
> > > when something is mentioned, it doesn't say how to do it. I think
> > > the
> > > article need more work, no just editing, but more content.
> > >
> > > Br,
> > >
> > > 2017-02-04 2:16 GMT-03:00 Link Dupont <link(a)sub-pop.net>:
> > >
> > > > On Sat, 2017-02-04 at 03:06 +0000, Corey W Sheldon wrote:
> > > > > it ACTUALLY mentioned how and what tools to use to do these
> > > > > things?
> > > >
> > > > I agree with Corey here. The better articles we publish are the
> > > > ones
> > > > that instruct *how* to do something (think of the GnuPG
> > > > series). The
> > > > GnuPG articles were salient enough that they could be used as a
> > > > guide
> > > > on setting up a GPG key and securing your email with it.
> > > >
> > > > This article doesn't offer any lasting value to the reader. How
> > > > does
> > > > this relate to Fedora? Maybe a better spin on this would be
> > > > "Making
> > > > Fedora more secure"? Or "Securing Fedora for use in a
public
> > > > setting"?
> > > >
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> Paul,
>
> This article was dead in the water for 5 months and was originally
> meant
> as a series, yet I try to revive it and it's an idea that is washed,
> claiming no scope for a series and no author, yet I've volunteered to
> take it up. And as to scope the initial was the ideas, article 2
> would
> be a deeper dive into how to do those things and article 3 a exercise
> for the reader on additional suggested tactics/readings. BUT.. seeing
> as
> this was totally glossed over and the emphasis has clearly gone to
> shorter SEO blessed articles over actual meaningful content, I am
> done
> bothering. Those wishing to see such are welcome to visit my blog.
>
> Regards,
>
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