Hi Stephen:
I've made a first pass on editing your article. I'm trying to bring it into
better compliance with the guidelines posted here (e.g. using sentence case
instead of title case):
I prefer title case myself, but the guidelines recommend using sentence case for
the section titles (even though they aren't sentences :P)
Also, I've tried to reword a few things to be in the imperative tense to make
the SEO score a little better. It is very hard to make SEO happy. I don't think
it is really designed for scoring technical articles.
Can you view the current version of your article here?:
Feel free to suggest rewording of anything that you think might be poorly or
incorrectly worded. I'm going to start working on the image now.
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:52 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
Hello Gregory,
No I haven't an idea what image to use for it. Sorry, I know that's not
a great help. It is a container focused platform, and suits Silverblue
(and CoreOS) with either Docker or Podman centric container build/run
options. Perhaps something from the container world would be suitable.
Stephen
On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 12:11 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> Thanks Stephen. I'll give it a once over and then request your
> feedback. In the
> meantime, do you have any ideas for the image?
>
> On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 13:05 -0400, Stephen Snow wrote:
> > If you need me to revise anything please advise me, I'm around to
> > take
> > care of it.
> >
> > Stephen
> > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 11:58 -0500, Gregory Lee Bartholomew wrote:
> > > This one looks pretty easy and I could use the practice anyway,
> > > so
> > > I'll give it
> > > a try.
> > >
> > > On Tue, 2020-03-10 at 17:46 +0100, Adam Samalik wrote:
> > > > Hi all,
> > > >
> > > > I promised an article for Wednesday about one of the desktops
> > > > from
> > > > Troy's
> > > > article [1], but other things slipped and I won't be able to do
> > > > that. :(
> > > >
> > > > However, there is this Quarkus article [2] ready to be
> > > > reviewed!
> > > > Would
> > > > anyone be able to give it an edit and an image, so it's ready
> > > > for
> > > > tomorrow?
> > > >
> > > > As a backup, I could try to do that in the morning if time
> > > > allows.
> > > >
> > > > Thanks!
> > > > Adam
> > > >
> > > > [1]
https://fedoramagazine.org/fedoras-gaggle-of-desktops/
> > > > [2]
> > > >
https://teams.fedoraproject.org/project/asamalik-fedora-magazine/us/140?k...
> > > >
> > > > --
> > > >
> > > > Adam Šamalík
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> > > > Red Hat
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