Hi Clement
Thanks for your suggestions on points.
*Will add some explanation at the very begning
*Will clarify real and virtual memory usage including simple and
complex flow.
Thanks
Ashutosh
On Thu, 2018-01-11 at 20:44 +0100, Clement Verna wrote:
> Hi Ashutosh, as Paul mentioned we came up with a few ideas on how
> your
> article could be improved.
>
> We thought that :
>
> * It would be good to have more explanation of processes in the
> introduction. The fact that they are numbered and belong to users,
> etc
> ... That would make it clear why someone would want to use ps to see
> the process list.
>
> * The explanation of fields is good, but explaining for instance real
> vs. virtual memory usage is needed so that the reader get a better
> understanding of each field and what they mean.
>
> * It would be great if the examples followed a "simple --> complex"
> flow, and focused on real-world common uses
>
> Let me know what do you think of these feedback.
>
> I am also happy to help if needed.
>
> Thanks
> Clement
>
> On 11 January 2018 at 19:58, Paul W. Frields <stickster(a)gmail.com>
> wrote:
> > On Fri, Jan 05, 2018 at 12:23:59PM +0530, Ashutosh Bhakare wrote:
> > > Hello
> > >
> > > First of all apologize for marking article as a Pitch in place of
> > > Draft.
> > >
> > > I have added few points to the article
https://fedoramagazine.org
> > > /?p=19
> > > 784&preview=true&preview_id=19784 yestarday
> > >
> > > while writing this article i have releazied i can split it into
> > > two
> > > article, Part 1 (current) will contains basic of ps and its
> > > usage. Part
> > > II (proposed) will contain kill, pgrep, pkill and top as a part
> > > of
> > > process management tools.
> > >
> > > Please review the draft and let me know your inputs.
> >
> > Hi Ashutosh, we discussed this in yesterday's editorial meeting.
> > There are some changes we'd like to see -- Clément (cc'd) will
> > reach
> > out to you, and you're welcome to coordinate on this list so others
> > can learn from the changes.
> >
> >
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