On 09/29/2016 04:55 PM, Paul W. Frields wrote:
On Wed, Sep 28, 2016 at 10:34:36AM -0000, Trishna Guha wrote:
> Hi everyone,
>
> This the draft link for the article
>
https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=14729&preview=1&_ppp=6fc57a0c25 So the
> idea is to automate deploying containers on atomic host using
> ansible and manage the containers with cockpit on web browser.
>
> I need you to review the draft. Any Comments and suggestions will be
> appreciated.
Trishna, could you redo the screenshots at a lower resolution? That
would make them easier to read both in the article and when
clicked/zoomed. Thanks!
Hey all! We briefly covered this one in the meeting tonight as well.
With the above feedback, everything for this article looks good, but we
also wanted to cover two additional things in terms of content:
(1) A brief / short intro to what Project Atomic is would be helpful for
readers who are just finding out about Atomic. A paragraph should be
fine, with links to reading more about what it is as well.
(2) We also wanted some more examples of how this can be used. It was
briefly mentioned at the top about using it for Atomic + Docker
projects, but some examples of what some of these projects are or why
someone might want to use this guide would be especially helpful. :)
Overall, the rest seems sound! I'm looking forward to seeing this one
published. If we can get all the small details ironed out, we're hoping
to aim for a publication date of next Friday, October 7th.
Thanks!
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Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7(a)gmail.com