[SSSD] [PATCH] Add enumerate details to the manpage and examples

David O'Brien davido at redhat.com
Thu May 20 12:00:11 UTC 2010


Stephen Gallagher wrote:
> On 05/19/2010 10:29 PM, David O'Brien wrote:
>> nack.
>>
>> 1. After a long discussion with other writers a couple of days ago, we
>> came to the conclusion that using an article with "SSSD" was incorrect,
>> because SSSD is a proper noun and a name. Hence, "performance impact on
>> the SSSD" should read "performance impact on SSSD". I know this gets
>> cloudy if you expand "sssd" in your head, and that's why the discussion
>> was as long as it was.
>>
>> 2. I'd recommend s/Also/Further at the beginning of a sentence like this.
>>
>> 3. s/assure/ensure
>>
>> 4. s/see the manpages/refer to the man pages
>>
>>
> 
> Thanks for the review! Updated patch attached.
> 
> 
I realise I'm nit-picking now, but our Word Usage guide lists "man page" 
as two words (see point 4, above).

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