[SSSD] [PATCH] Add enumerate details to the manpage and examples

Stephen Gallagher sgallagh at redhat.com
Thu May 20 11:53:40 UTC 2010


On 05/19/2010 10:29 PM, David O'Brien wrote:
> nack.
>
> 1. After a long discussion with other writers a couple of days ago, we
> came to the conclusion that using an article with "SSSD" was incorrect,
> because SSSD is a proper noun and a name. Hence, "performance impact on
> the SSSD" should read "performance impact on SSSD". I know this gets
> cloudy if you expand "sssd" in your head, and that's why the discussion
> was as long as it was.
>
> 2. I'd recommend s/Also/Further at the beginning of a sentence like this.
>
> 3. s/assure/ensure
>
> 4. s/see the manpages/refer to the man pages
>
>

Thanks for the review! Updated patch attached.

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