[SSSD] [PATCH] Add enumerate details to the manpage and examples

Stephen Gallagher sgallagh at redhat.com
Thu May 20 12:08:51 UTC 2010


On 05/20/2010 08:00 AM, David O'Brien wrote:
> Stephen Gallagher wrote:
>> On 05/19/2010 10:29 PM, David O'Brien wrote:
>>> nack.
>>>
>>> 1. After a long discussion with other writers a couple of days ago, we
>>> came to the conclusion that using an article with "SSSD" was incorrect,
>>> because SSSD is a proper noun and a name. Hence, "performance impact on
>>> the SSSD" should read "performance impact on SSSD". I know this gets
>>> cloudy if you expand "sssd" in your head, and that's why the discussion
>>> was as long as it was.
>>>
>>> 2. I'd recommend s/Also/Further at the beginning of a sentence like this.
>>>
>>> 3. s/assure/ensure
>>>
>>> 4. s/see the manpages/refer to the man pages
>>>
>>>
>>
>> Thanks for the review! Updated patch attached.
>>
>>
> I realise I'm nit-picking now, but our Word Usage guide lists "man page"
> as two words (see point 4, above).
>

Last version, acked off-list.

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