[SSSD] [PATCH] Add enumerate details to the manpage and examples

Stephen Gallagher sgallagh at redhat.com
Thu May 20 18:12:37 UTC 2010


On 05/20/2010 08:38 AM, Stephen Gallagher wrote:
> On 05/20/2010 08:37 AM, Stephen Gallagher wrote:
>> On 05/20/2010 08:08 AM, Stephen Gallagher wrote:
>>> On 05/20/2010 08:00 AM, David O'Brien wrote:
>>>> Stephen Gallagher wrote:
>>>>> On 05/19/2010 10:29 PM, David O'Brien wrote:
>>>>>> nack.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 1. After a long discussion with other writers a couple of days
>>>>>> ago, we
>>>>>> came to the conclusion that using an article with "SSSD" was
>>>>>> incorrect,
>>>>>> because SSSD is a proper noun and a name. Hence, "performance
>>>>>> impact on
>>>>>> the SSSD" should read "performance impact on SSSD". I know this gets
>>>>>> cloudy if you expand "sssd" in your head, and that's why the
>>>>>> discussion
>>>>>> was as long as it was.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 2. I'd recommend s/Also/Further at the beginning of a sentence like
>>>>>> this.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 3. s/assure/ensure
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 4. s/see the manpages/refer to the man pages
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks for the review! Updated patch attached.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>> I realise I'm nit-picking now, but our Word Usage guide lists "man
>>>> page"
>>>> as two words (see point 4, above).
>>>>
>>>
>>> Last version, acked off-list.
>>>
>>
>> Accidentally resent the previous patch. Correct one attached.
>>
>
> *sigh* Still the wrong patch. One more try?
>
>

Pushed to master and sssd-1-2.

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