[SSSD] [PATCH] Add enumerate details to the manpage and examples

Stephen Gallagher sgallagh at redhat.com
Thu May 20 12:38:11 UTC 2010


On 05/20/2010 08:37 AM, Stephen Gallagher wrote:
> On 05/20/2010 08:08 AM, Stephen Gallagher wrote:
>> On 05/20/2010 08:00 AM, David O'Brien wrote:
>>> Stephen Gallagher wrote:
>>>> On 05/19/2010 10:29 PM, David O'Brien wrote:
>>>>> nack.
>>>>>
>>>>> 1. After a long discussion with other writers a couple of days ago, we
>>>>> came to the conclusion that using an article with "SSSD" was
>>>>> incorrect,
>>>>> because SSSD is a proper noun and a name. Hence, "performance
>>>>> impact on
>>>>> the SSSD" should read "performance impact on SSSD". I know this gets
>>>>> cloudy if you expand "sssd" in your head, and that's why the
>>>>> discussion
>>>>> was as long as it was.
>>>>>
>>>>> 2. I'd recommend s/Also/Further at the beginning of a sentence like
>>>>> this.
>>>>>
>>>>> 3. s/assure/ensure
>>>>>
>>>>> 4. s/see the manpages/refer to the man pages
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Thanks for the review! Updated patch attached.
>>>>
>>>>
>>> I realise I'm nit-picking now, but our Word Usage guide lists "man page"
>>> as two words (see point 4, above).
>>>
>>
>> Last version, acked off-list.
>>
>
> Accidentally resent the previous patch. Correct one attached.
>

*sigh* Still the wrong patch. One more try?

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