[SSSD] [PATCH] 0001-Copy-edit-and-format-review-sssd.conf.patch

David O'Brien davido at redhat.com
Wed May 19 07:58:18 UTC 2010


Jakub Hrozek wrote:
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> On 05/19/2010 09:27 AM, David O'Brien wrote:
>> Now that this file is taking on the nature of a help file, I've
>> attempted to improve its readability, with:
>>
>> 1. Minor layout changes (whitespace between sections)
>> 2. Spell check, inc. s/backend/back end (standardization)
>> 3. General copy-edit
>>
>> Pretty trivial stuff.
>>
> 
> Nack, one of the comments still mentions EntryCacheTimeout and
> EntryCacheNoWaitRefreshTimeout - these are remains of the v1 config
> format, we should also change them to entry_cache_timeout and
> entry_cache_nowait_timeout (the example below the comment is correct).
> 
Fixed.

> I'm also windering whether we should advertise enumerate=True in the
> examples for remote domains?

I don't know the answer so I've left it as-is. I prefer not to go beyond 
English edits unless I *really* know what I'm doing.  ;-)

Revised patch attached.

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