On 10/25/2012 01:29 PM, Robyn Bergeron wrote:
The Fedora Project is a worldwide, open partnership of free software contributors and enthusiasts. Our mission is to lead the advancement of free and open source software and content as a collaborative community.
The Fedora Project is primarily sponsored by Red Hat, the world's most trusted provider of open source technology. (I'm not quite sold on your last line re: why red hat invests, but can go either way, I'm not too picky) One thing to consider: Is it worth highlighting more specifically that Fedora is the upstream for RHEL?
How about something liked
The Fedora Project is a worldwide, open partnership of free software contributors and enthusiasts. Our mission is to lead the advancement of free and open source software and content as a collaborative community. Red Hat sponsors the Fedora Project, which creates Fedora, the upstream Linux distribution to Red Hat Enterprise Linux.
(distribution to or distribution for?)