On 10/25/2012 01:29 PM, Robyn Bergeron
wrote:
The Fedora Project is a worldwide, open partnership of free
software contributors and enthusiasts. Our mission is to lead the
advancement of free and open source software and content as a
collaborative community.
The Fedora Project is primarily sponsored by Red Hat, the world's
most trusted provider of open source technology. (I'm not quite
sold on your last line re: why red hat invests, but can go either
way, I'm not too picky)
One thing to consider: Is it worth highlighting more specifically
that Fedora is the upstream for RHEL?
How about something liked
The Fedora Project is a worldwide, open partnership of free software
contributors and enthusiasts. Our mission is to lead the advancement
of free and open source software and content as a collaborative
community. Red Hat sponsors the Fedora Project, which creates
Fedora, the upstream Linux distribution to Red Hat Enterprise Linux.
(distribution to or distribution for?)