I checked and updated version numbers (for instance, GNOME 2.27.90 beta
is the latest GNOME because GNOME 2.28 isn't yet out) and tried to make
the wording flow a little nicer.
https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_12_Alpha_Announcement
Steven, it's all yours.
https://fedorahosted.org/marketing-team/ticket/16
--Mel