<div dir="ltr"><div><div><div><div><div><div>Hi,<br><br>>I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project<br>
>Week" or simply "Week".<br>
><br>
>I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second<br>
>bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall<br>
>code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ?<br>
>Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a<br>
>deliverable.<br><br></div>changes have been done.<br><br>>I don't really understand the word "lucid" in this context.<br><br></div>by lucid I mean to say that everything looks clear. Things are not over-focused, they are simple, clear yet attractive. <br>
<br><br></div>I have submitted my application on melange <a href="https://google-melange.appspot.com/gsoc/proposal/review/google/gsoc2013/abhisheksingh/22001">https://google-melange.appspot.com/gsoc/proposal/review/google/gsoc2013/abhisheksingh/22001</a><br>
</div>It can still be edited. Your suggestions are highly appreciated.<br><br></div><br><br></div><div>Regards,<br></div>Abhishek<br>
</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Apr 29, 2013 at 12:04 AM, Jakub Hrozek <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:jhrozek@redhat.com" target="_blank">jhrozek@redhat.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div class="im">On Sun, Apr 28, 2013 at 11:44:01PM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:<br>
> Hi Jakub,<br>
><br>
</div><div class="im">> I have got the diff patches sent by you and the changes have been done :)<br>
> Should I submit it on melange now ?<br>
><br>
> Thank you!<br>
><br>
<br>
</div>Hey Abhishek,<br>
<br>
couple of more comments (and maybe the native speakers on this list<br>
would have more):<br>
<br>
In the paragraph titled "Why do you want to work with the Fedora<br>
Project?", the last sentence sounds a little too excited for a<br>
application, but maybe that's just my English. Anyway, I don't really<br>
understand the word "lucid" in this context.<br>
<br>
I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project<br>
Week" or simply "Week".<br>
<br>
I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second<br>
bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall<br>
code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ?<br>
Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a<br>
deliverable.<br>
<br>
The rest looks good to me.<br>
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