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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 11/16/12 5:55 PM, Shawn Wells wrote:<br>
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<pre wrap="">From 313f34ee966afd541c641e2cae9caa69721d8bd0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shawn Wells <a moz-do-not-send="true" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="mailto:shawn@redhat.com"><shawn@redhat.com></a>
Date: Fri, 16 Nov 2012 07:38:35 -0500
Subject: [PATCH 12/13] DISA FSO copy editing of RHEL6/input/services/ntp.xml
DISA FSO copy editing of RHEL6/input/services/ntp.xml
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RHEL6/input/services/ntp.xml | 10 +++++-----
1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/RHEL6/input/services/ntp.xml b/RHEL6/input/services/ntp.xml
index fd78d1e..2e593d9 100644
--- a/RHEL6/input/services/ntp.xml
+++ b/RHEL6/input/services/ntp.xml
@@ -55,16 +55,16 @@ logs and auditing possible security breaches.</rationale>
<title>Specify a Remote NTP Server</title>
<description>To specify a remote NTP server for time synchronization, edit
the file <tt>/etc/ntp.conf</tt>. Add or correct the following lines,
-substituting the IP or hostname of a remote NTP server for <em>ntpserver</em>:
+substituting the IP or hostname of a remote NTP server for <em>ntpserver</em>.
<pre>server <i>ntpserver</i></pre>
This instructs the NTP software to contact that remote server to obtain time
data.
</description>
<ocil clause="this is not the case">
-A remote NTP server should be configured for time synchronization. To verify that
-one is configured, open the following file:
+A remote NTP server should be configured for time synchronization. To verify
+one is configured, open the following file.
<pre>/etc/ntp.conf</pre>
-In the file, there should be a section similar to the following:
+In the file, there should be a section similar to the following.
<pre># --- OUR TIMESERVERS -----
server <i>ntpserver</i></pre>
</ocil>
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ recommended.</rationale>
<description>Additional NTP servers can be specified for time synchronization
in the file <tt>/etc/ntp.conf</tt>. To do so, add additional lines of the
following form, substituting the IP address or hostname of a remote NTP server for
-<em>ntpserver</em>:
+<em>ntpserver</em>.
<pre>server <i>ntpserver</i></pre>
</description>
<rationale>Specifying additional NTP servers increases the availability of
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Ack<br>
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(note these patches were created by FSO, not myself. I only posted
publicly.)
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