On Thu, Jun 24, 2010 at 2:58 AM, shaiton shaiton@fedoraproject.org wrote:
On Thu, Jun 24, 2010 at 9:43 AM, Sijis Aviles sijis@fedoraproject.org wrote:
On Mon, May 24, 2010 at 9:33 AM, shaiton shaiton@fedoraproject.org wrote:
Hi there,
I am currently translating the website concerning spins, and just found this sentence: "Use KTorrent or KGet to get new the versions of Fedora KDE Desktop Edition!"
Please, forgive that email if I am wrong, but I think that " to get new the versions" is wrong.
This specific sentence is located there: http://spins.fedoraproject.org/kde/#about in the fedora-web.master-spins-fedoraproject file.
Regards,
-- Kévin Raymond GPG-Key: A5BCB3A2
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I must have missed this. What do you think we should rephrase that sentence to? Are those the wrong tools to get KDE?
Thanks,
Sijis
Hi, I've forgotten too...
It was just about english. English is not my native language, but I've never seen such formulation.
Does "Use KTorrent or KGet to get new the versions of Fedora KDE Desktop Edition!" shouldn't be "Use KTorrent or KGet to get the new versions of Fedora KDE Desktop Edition!" or simply "Use KTorrent or KGet to get new versions of Fedora KDE Desktop Edition!"
I should probably speak about that on IRC (for further corrections).
Thanks,
-- Kévin Raymond GPG-Key: A5BCB3A2
Oh! I see the difference now. The parts "new the" and "the new" are swapped, in "get new the versions".
You are correct, it should be "get the new versions", although the way you've suggested will work.
I've updated that piece of text.
Thanks again for noticing this.
Sijis
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