Hi Stephen
How do you do? I am Noriko Mizumoto coming from Fedora Translation Project.
Recently the following document which you are the last author has been translated into Japanese by the community and uploaded in fedora. http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FedoraXenQuickstartFC5 (EN) http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ja_JP/FedoraXenQuickstartFC5 (JA) And as one of the community member I had the opportunity to have it's proofreading of translated document, and found one typo and one suggestion in English file.
I had contact fedora-docs-list, and heard that contacting last author for these matter is the way to go, so here I am.
Could you kindly consider if those changes are acceptable?
Typo: Under Hints section, "Q: I am trying to start *then xend service and nothing happens, then when I do a `xm list1 I get the following:" * 'then' doubled, it should read "I am trying to start xend service and then nothing happens,"
Suggestion: Under Automatically Loading Domains On Startup section, "Note that the /etc/init.d/xendomains script is broken with respect to its use of the LSB init functions." * This is hard to translate. Is it possible to rephrase something like "Note that the etc/init.d/xendomains script does not comply with the LSB standard."?
Cheers Noriko Mizumoto