On Sun, Apr 28, 2013 at 11:44:01PM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:
Hi Jakub,
I have got the diff patches sent by you and the changes have been done :)
Should I submit it on melange now ?
Thank you!
Hey Abhishek,
couple of more comments (and maybe the native speakers on this list
would have more):
In the paragraph titled "Why do you want to work with the Fedora
Project?", the last sentence sounds a little too excited for a
application, but maybe that's just my English. Anyway, I don't really
understand the word "lucid" in this context.
I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project
Week" or simply "Week".
I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second
bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall
code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ?
Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a
deliverable.
The rest looks good to me.