There is some changes some change in application url as suggested by Buddhike (Fedora org admin for GSoC 2013). Now wiki page for application content is  https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GSOC_2013/Student_Application_abhisheksingh/Implement_a_battery_of_unit_tests_for_SSSD%28471%29 while other info is still at present at previous url  https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/GSOC_2013/Student_Application_abhisheksingh




On Mon, Apr 29, 2013 at 5:03 PM, Abhishek Singh <abhishekkumarsingh.cse@gmail.com> wrote:
Hi,


>I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project
>Week" or simply "Week".
>
>I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second
>bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall
>code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ?
>Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a
>deliverable.

changes have been done.


>I don't really understand the word "lucid" in this context.

by lucid I mean to say that everything looks clear. Things are not over-focused, they are simple, clear yet attractive.


I have submitted my application on melange https://google-melange.appspot.com/gsoc/proposal/review/google/gsoc2013/abhisheksingh/22001
It can still be edited. Your suggestions are highly appreciated.



Regards,
Abhishek


On Mon, Apr 29, 2013 at 12:04 AM, Jakub Hrozek <jhrozek@redhat.com> wrote:
On Sun, Apr 28, 2013 at 11:44:01PM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:
> Hi Jakub,
>
> I have got the diff patches sent by you and the changes have been done :)
> Should I submit it on melange now ?
>
> Thank you!
>

Hey Abhishek,

couple of more comments (and maybe the native speakers on this list
would have more):

In the paragraph titled "Why do you want to work with the Fedora
Project?", the last sentence sounds a little too excited for a
application, but maybe that's just my English. Anyway, I don't really
understand the word "lucid" in this context.

I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either "Project
Week" or simply "Week".

I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second
bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall
code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ?
Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a
deliverable.

The rest looks good to me.
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