There is some changes some change in application url as suggested by
Buddhike (Fedora org admin for GSoC 2013). Now wiki page for application
content is
On Mon, Apr 29, 2013 at 5:03 PM, Abhishek Singh <
abhishekkumarsingh.cse(a)gmail.com> wrote:
Hi,
>I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either
"Project
>Week" or simply "Week".
>
>I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second
>bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall
>code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ?
>Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a
>deliverable.
changes have been done.
>I don't really understand the word "lucid" in this context.
by lucid I mean to say that everything looks clear. Things are not
over-focused, they are simple, clear yet attractive.
I have submitted my application on melange
https://google-melange.appspot.com/gsoc/proposal/review/google/gsoc2013/a...
It can still be edited. Your suggestions are highly appreciated.
Regards,
Abhishek
On Mon, Apr 29, 2013 at 12:04 AM, Jakub Hrozek <jhrozek(a)redhat.com> wrote:
> On Sun, Apr 28, 2013 at 11:44:01PM +0530, Abhishek Singh wrote:
> > Hi Jakub,
> >
> > I have got the diff patches sent by you and the changes have been done
> :)
> > Should I submit it on melange now ?
> >
> > Thank you!
> >
>
> Hey Abhishek,
>
> couple of more comments (and maybe the native speakers on this list
> would have more):
>
> In the paragraph titled "Why do you want to work with the Fedora
> Project?", the last sentence sounds a little too excited for a
> application, but maybe that's just my English. Anyway, I don't really
> understand the word "lucid" in this context.
>
> I wouldn't name the weeks in the plan "Test Week" but either
"Project
> Week" or simply "Week".
>
> I the "Deliverables" section, I don't really understand the second
> bullet point. Should it say something like "Contribute to the overall
> code quality by uncovering issues with the unit tests" ?
> Also the first bullet point could mention the LDAP provider tests as a
> deliverable.
>
> The rest looks good to me.
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